列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete, especially the last sentence. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then support it with specific reasons or examples. Avoid redundancy and incomplete thoughts. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences and use linking words to improve coherence.

示例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to remember what I need. However, sometimes I might forget items if the list is long. Therefore, I try to prepare everything mentally before going shopping to avoid missing anything.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain how making a to-do list helps you. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about the benefits. Also, avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

示例: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because it helps me stay organised. For example, it allows me to prioritise tasks and avoid feeling lost during the day. As a result, I can complete my work more efficiently.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Avoid negative labels like 'lazy' and instead provide more neutral reasons. Use linking words to structure your answer logically and give specific examples. Keep your sentences clear and concise.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming. For instance, preparing detailed schedules or to-do lists can take extra effort, which they might prefer to avoid. Consequently, they choose to rely on memory instead.

建议: Your answer is relevant but somewhat unclear and repetitive. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then explain why with specific reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, check grammar and sentence structure for clarity.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient. For example, if I lose a paper list, I can still access my phone easily. Moreover, using digital lists is a common habit for me every day.

× When I shop I will prepare everything and I will remember them all.

✓ When I shop, I prepare everything and remember it all.

The use of 'will' here is incorrect because the sentence describes a habitual action, which should be expressed in the present simple tense rather than the future tense.

× I will remember them all.

✓ I will remember it all.

The pronoun 'them' is plural, but it refers to 'everything', which is singular. Therefore, the singular pronoun 'it' should be used to agree with the singular noun.

× I would not make a list because it seems to be very frustrated for me because it was pretty tiring.

✓ I do not make a list because it seems very frustrating for me and it is pretty tiring.

The modal verb 'would' is incorrectly used here; the speaker is describing a habitual action, so the present simple tense is appropriate. Also, 'frustrated' is an adjective describing a person, but here 'frustrating' should be used to describe the situation.

× If you make a note on the.

✓ (Sentence incomplete and unclear; cannot correct without additional context.)

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity, making it impossible to correct without further information.

× Yes of course I would like A to do list for my work so I can know what I have to work for everyday instead of I would just feeling lost on what I am going to work.

✓ Yes, of course I would like a to-do list for my work so I can know what I have to do every day instead of feeling lost about what I am going to work on.

The phrase 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list' with hyphens. Also, 'work for everyday' is incorrect; it should be 'do every day'. The phrase 'I would just feeling lost' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'feeling lost'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I would like A to do list for my work so I can know what I have to work for everyday instead of I would just feeling lost on what I am going to work.

✓ I would like a to-do list for my work so I can know what I have to do every day instead of feeling lost about what I am going to work on.

The preposition 'on' is more appropriate than 'for' after 'work' in this context. Also, 'feeling lost on' should be 'feeling lost about' to correctly express confusion regarding the task.

× I would just feeling lost on what I am going to work.

✓ I would just feel lost about what I am going to work on.

The verb form 'feeling' is incorrect here; it should be the base form 'feel' after 'would'. Also, the preposition 'on' should be placed after 'work'.

× I think some people are quite lazy because some people think that making this is a very time consuming thing because you need to prepare many things like you need to make a ferry timetable or to do lists on the spend many time.

✓ I think some people are quite lazy because they think that making this is very time-consuming since you need to prepare many things, like making a ferry timetable or to-do lists, which takes a lot of time.

The phrase 'to do lists on the spend many time' is incorrect. It should be 'to-do lists, which takes a lot of time'. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× like you need to make a ferry timetable or to do lists on the spend many time.

✓ like you need to make a ferry timetable or to-do lists, which takes a lot of time.

The preposition 'on the spend many time' is incorrect and unclear. It should be replaced with a phrase like 'which takes a lot of time' to correctly express the meaning.

× I prefer making a list on my phone because I I can watch my list if I lost the paper and also pin on the is a more common behavior I would use everyday.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because I can check my list if I lose the paper, and also using my phone is a more common habit I use every day.

The phrase 'pin on the is a more common behavior' is unclear and incorrect. It is corrected to 'using my phone is a more common habit'. Also, 'watch my list' is incorrect; 'check my list' is appropriate. 'Lost' should be 'lose' to match the present tense context. 'Everyday' as an adjective is corrected to 'every day' as an adverbial phrase.