列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp (ví dụ: 'take a lease' thay vì 'make a list'). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lỗi sai cơ bản.

示例: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I already know exactly what I want to buy.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích chi tiết hơn với các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I often make a list for my work because I have many tasks to complete daily. It helps me remember what I need to do each day.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng các từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng để diễn đạt ý kiến cá nhân một cách tự nhiên.

示例: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it complicated or inconvenient.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cách diễn đạt chưa rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi sai để truyền đạt ý tưởng hiệu quả hơn.

示例: Actually, I prefer to make lists both on paper and on my phone because if I forget one, I have a backup to check.

× No, I am.

✓ No, I don't.

The sentence 'No, I am.' is incorrect because the question asks about a habitual action, so the negative form of the present simple tense 'I don't' is appropriate here.

× I don't have to take a lease when I shopping because when I shopping I know exactly what I want to buy.

✓ I don't have to make a list when I shop because when I shop I know exactly what I want to buy.

The phrase 'take a lease' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list'. Also, 'when I shopping' is incorrect; the verb 'shop' should be in the base form after 'when I' to form the present simple tense.

× For what I often make a list because there are many texts that I have to do daily and it's very work with me.

✓ I often make a list because there are many tasks that I have to do daily and it works very well for me.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and word choice. 'For what I often make a list' is incorrect; it should be 'I often make a list'. 'Texts' should be 'tasks'. 'It's very work with me' is incorrect; it should be 'it works very well for me'.

× It's remind me what I have to done last day.

✓ It reminds me what I had to do the day before.

'It's remind' should be 'It reminds' to agree with the singular subject. 'I have to done' is incorrect; it should be 'I had to do' to indicate past obligation. 'Last day' is better expressed as 'the day before'.

× Personally I don't know why some people don't like making this or maybe they feel its very complicated and it's a long convenience for their for them.

✓ Personally, I don't know why some people don't like making lists, or maybe they feel it's very complicated and inconvenient for them.

'Making this' is vague; 'making lists' is clearer. 'Its' should be 'it's' (it is). 'A long convenience' is incorrect; 'inconvenient' is the correct adjective. 'For their for them' is redundant; 'for them' is sufficient.

× Actually I will make a list box in on my on paper and on my phone because when I forget about once I will have another backup for checking please.

✓ Actually, I will make a list both on my paper and on my phone because if I forget one, I will have another backup to check.

'Make a list box in on my on paper' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list both on my paper and on my phone'. 'When I forget about once' is incorrect; 'if I forget one' is correct. 'For checking please' is incorrect; 'to check' is appropriate.