列表— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Yes, I usually plan my meals for the entire week and make a detailed shopping list. This helps me to avoid impulsive purchases and insurance. I buy only what I need. It prevents me from buying fresh vegetables that might spoil the fridge because I forgot about them.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Yes, I usually make a list of all my work obligations because it helps me to stay organized and ensures that I don't forget any important details. For instance, when I write down my tasks, it clears my mental space which allows me to focus better.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
I suppose some people might find making lists really time consuming and quite challenging to remember all the things that should be wrote down, but I think it is a more productive way for working and for shopping for example too.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I definitely prefer to make lists on paper as it gives a representation, a physical embodiment of my thoughts, and also it is a good way to remember all the important details by writing them down.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分数: 75.0建议: Ваш ответ содержит полезную информацию, но есть небольшие ошибки и неясности, например, слово "insurance" здесь неуместно. Рекомендуется использовать более точные слова и избегать лишних деталей, чтобы ответ был более естественным и понятным.
示例: Yes, I usually plan my meals for the week and make a detailed shopping list. This helps me avoid impulsive purchases and waste. For example, I only buy fresh vegetables that I know I will use, so they don't spoil in the fridge.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分数: 85.0建议: Ответ хороший, но можно улучшить связность, используя больше связующих слов и разнообразить лексику. Также стоит избегать повторов и сделать ответ более плавным.
示例: Yes, I usually make a list of all my work tasks because it helps me stay organized and not forget important details. For example, writing down my tasks clears my mind, so I can focus better throughout the day.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分数: 70.0建议: В ответе есть грамматические ошибки и нечеткие формулировки. Рекомендуется использовать правильные времена и формы слов, а также структурировать ответ более логично с помощью связующих слов.
示例: I think some people don't like making lists because it can be time-consuming and they might find it hard to remember everything to write down. However, I believe lists are very helpful for being productive at work and when shopping.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分数: 80.0建议: Ответ хороший, но можно сделать его более естественным, используя более простые и распространённые выражения. Также стоит добавить связующие слова для плавности речи.
示例: I definitely prefer making lists on paper because it feels more real and helps me remember important details better when I write them down.
语法
× I suppose some people might find making lists really time consuming and quite challenging to remember all the things that should be wrote down, but I think it is a more productive way for working and for shopping for example too.
✓ I suppose some people might find making lists really time consuming and quite challenging to remember all the things that should be written down, but I think it is a more productive way for working and for shopping for example too.
The verb 'wrote' is the simple past tense, but here the past participle 'written' is required after 'should be' to form the passive voice correctly.
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