列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is a bit long and somewhat repetitive. Try to be more concise and directly answer the question first, then add specific reasons or examples. Use simpler and clearer sentences to sound more natural.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop to make sure I don't forget anything important. For example, I write down groceries I need for the week so I can shop efficiently and save time.

建议: Your answer is understandable but a bit unclear and awkward in phrasing. Try to directly answer the question and explain clearly how making lists helps you as a student. Avoid unnecessary words and improve sentence flow.

示例: I don't have a job because I am a student. However, I make lists of my daily tasks and subjects to organize my study schedule, which helps me prepare better for exams.

建议: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases like 'tribal matter'. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use simple vocabulary. Explain reasons why some people dislike making lists with clear examples.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or boring. They may prefer to remember things in their own way instead of writing them down.

建议: Your answer is good but a bit long and repetitive. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repeating similar points. Also, correct grammar mistakes for better clarity.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and easy to carry. Unlike paper, which can get wet or torn in bad weather, my phone keeps the list safe and accessible anytime.

× Shopping is one of the most important factor and as well as one of the most important activity performed by everyone in their day-to-day life.

✓ Shopping is one of the most important factors as well as one of the most important activities performed by everyone in their day-to-day life.

The nouns 'factor' and 'activity' should be plural ('factors' and 'activities') because they refer to multiple important elements, not just one. In English, when using 'one of the most', the noun following should be plural.

× And it is important to prepare an itinerary in order to list out everything properly and not to leave anything that is required by us, that was required by us etcetera.

✓ It is important to prepare an itinerary in order to list out everything properly and not leave anything that is required by us.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is generally informal and unnecessary here. Also, 'not to leave' should be 'not leave' for parallel structure. The phrase 'that was required by us etcetera' is redundant and unclear, so it is better omitted for clarity.

× Actually, I don't work and I perform.

✓ Actually, I don't work; I am just a student.

The phrase 'I don't work and I perform' is unclear and incorrect. 'Perform' needs an object and context. The intended meaning is better expressed by stating 'I am just a student' to clarify the situation.

× So for that reason also I make a list of the routine as well as my subjects in order to prepare it for my daily day-to-day life and for my examination.

✓ So for that reason, I also make a list of my routine as well as my subjects in order to prepare for my daily life and my examinations.

'Routine' is uncountable or singular here, so 'the routine' is acceptable but 'my routine' is more natural. 'Examination' should be plural 'examinations' if referring to multiple exams. Also, 'prepare it' is unclear; better to say 'prepare for'. 'Daily day-to-day life' is redundant; 'daily life' suffices.

× List is the process of creating and collecting everything in a particular paper as well as planning, and some people find it exaggerating as well as a tough task to do and a tribal matter, so some people doesn't like it I think.

✓ A list is the process of creating and collecting everything on a particular paper as well as planning, and some people find it exaggerated as well as a tough task to do and a trivial matter, so some people don't like it, I think.

'List' needs an article 'A list'. 'In a particular paper' should be 'on a particular paper' (preposition correction). 'Exaggerating' is incorrect; 'exaggerated' is the correct adjective. 'Doesn't' should be 'don't' to agree with plural 'some people'. 'Tribal matter' is likely a mistake for 'trivial matter'.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone as phone is one of the most convenient and easy to carry.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone as the phone is one of the most convenient and easiest to carry.

The noun 'phone' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific object. Also, 'easy to carry' should be 'easiest to carry' to match the superlative 'one of the most'.

× I know paper is easy to carry also but it can be fold as well as torn and as well as it can be weight due to the rain and the climatic situation also while phone might be safer than it.

✓ I know paper is easy to carry also, but it can be folded or torn and can get wet due to rain and climatic conditions, while the phone might be safer than it.

'Fold' should be 'folded' (past participle). 'Weight' is incorrect; the correct word is 'wet'. The phrase 'as well as' is overused and awkward; better to use 'or' and commas for clarity. 'Climatic situation' is better expressed as 'climatic conditions'. 'Phone' needs 'the' before it. 'Than it' is correct here.