列表— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Yes definitely. I like making these before I go shopping. It helps me to stay organized and avoid forget something.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Yes, definitely. I like to make this on my walk because it helps me to know what things I need to do on that day and help me to keep organized.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
I think they may think that it is a waste of time if someone can. Come keep the lists. It is a waste of an effort to make a list in the 1st.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I prefer to make this on paper because I can keep it in front of me and it reminds me not to forget something important I need to do.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分数: 75.0建议: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词有些错误，比如“avoid forget something”应为“avoid forgetting something”。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。
示例: Yes, definitely. I like making a shopping list before I go because it helps me stay organized and avoid forgetting anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分数: 70.0建议: 回答中“make this on my walk”表达不清晰，建议使用更准确的短语，如“make a list while I walk”。此外，句子结构重复，建议使用连接词使句子更连贯。
示例: Yes, definitely. I like to make a list while I walk because it helps me know what tasks I need to complete that day and keeps me organized.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分数: 50.0建议: 回答表达不清晰且有语法错误，句子不完整。建议简化表达，明确说明原因，并注意句子完整性和逻辑性。
示例: I think some people feel making lists is a waste of time because they prefer to remember things mentally rather than writing them down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分数: 80.0建议: 回答较好，但“make this on paper”中的“this”用词不当，建议改为“make a list”。此外，可以增加连接词使句子更流畅。
示例: I prefer to make a list on paper because I can keep it in front of me, which reminds me not to forget any important tasks.
语法
× It helps me to stay organized and avoid forget something.
✓ It helps me to stay organized and avoid forgetting something.
动词avoid后应接动名词形式forgetting，而不是动词原形forget。
× I like to make this on my walk because it helps me to know what things I need to do on that day and help me to keep organized.
✓ I like to make this on my walk because it helps me to know what things I need to do on that day and helps me to keep organized.
主语是第三人称单数it，后面动词应使用第三人称单数形式helps，而不是help。
× I think they may think that it is a waste of time if someone can. Come keep the lists.
✓ I think they may think that it is a waste of time if someone can keep the lists.
句子中断句错误，'Come'应与前句合并，形成完整句子。
× It is a waste of an effort to make a list in the 1st.
✓ It is a waste of effort to make a list in the first place.
短语应为'a waste of effort'，不加冠词'an'，且'1st'应写为'first place'。
× I prefer to make this on paper because I can keep it in front of me and it reminds me not to forget something important I need to do.
✓ I prefer to make my list on paper because I can keep it in front of me and it reminds me not to forget something important I need to do.
代词'this'指代不明确，应改为'my list'以明确指代。
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