列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法和表达不够自然，建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更流畅。

示例: Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and saves time.

建议: 回答内容较完整，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯，同时避免重复表达“helps me stay organized”。

示例: Yes, I make a list every morning for my work because it helps me remember all the tasks I need to complete. Moreover, this method allows me to manage my time efficiently and finish my work on schedule.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意动词时态和句子完整性，避免出现不完整的句子。

示例: I think some people have excellent memories and don't need lists. Others feel that making lists wastes time because they prefer to be flexible and do things spontaneously.

建议: 回答内容较好，但部分表达不够地道，建议调整句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

示例: When I'm working, I prefer to make a list on paper because I can stick it on my computer screen, which helps me remember all the tasks I need to complete. However, for shopping, I find it more convenient to use my phone since it's easy to add or remove items.

× Yes, I make a list before shop every time I'd like everything is organized and that will help me save time.

✓ Yes, I make a list before shopping every time because I'd like everything to be organized and that will help me save time.

这里的 'before shop' 应该使用动名词形式 'before shopping'，因为介词后面需要接动名词。

× Yes, I make a list before shop every time I'd like everything is organized and that will help me save time.

✓ Yes, I make a list before shopping every time because I'd like everything to be organized and that will help me save time.

'I'd like everything is organized' 中，'like' 后面应接不定式结构，正确表达为 'I'd like everything to be organized'。

× I think some people have excellent memories, so they can remember everything they need without making lists.

✓ I think some people have excellent memory, so they can remember everything they need without making lists.

'memories' 在这里应使用不可数名词 'memory'，表示记忆力。

× some people feel that making lists waste their time because they prefer to do things more randomly or shop without planning.

✓ some people feel that making lists wastes their time because they prefer to do things more randomly or shop without planning.

主语 'making lists' 是第三人称单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式 'wastes'。

× For these people, being flexible and acting on imposing is.

✓ For these people, being flexible and acting on impulse is important.

原句结构不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，且 'imposing' 用词错误，应为 'impulse'，表示冲动。

× When I'm working, I prefer to make a list on paper because I can stick it on my computer screen, which helps me remind all the tasks I need to complete.

✓ When I'm working, I prefer to make a list on paper because I can stick it on my computer screen, which helps me remember all the tasks I need to complete.

'helps me remind' 用法错误，应为 'helps me remember'，因为 'remind' 需要有被提醒的人作为宾语。