列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中有词汇错误，如"leads"应为"lists"，影响了表达的准确性。建议注意单词拼写和发音，避免用词错误。此外，回答可以更自然简洁，避免重复表达。

示例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I often shop online and just buy what I need directly.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，如"works"应为"work"，"make me to deal"应为"help me deal"。建议加强语法练习，尤其是动词单复数和固定搭配的使用。回答内容可以更连贯，使用连接词。

示例: Yes, I sometimes make a list when I have a lot of work to do. It helps me plan better and manage my tasks more efficiently.

建议: 回答中存在多处语法和表达错误，如"leads"应为"lists"，"take so many times"应为"takes too much time"。句子不完整，表达不流畅。建议多练习句子结构和连贯表达。

示例: To be honest, I don't like making lists because it takes too much time, and sometimes I feel too lazy to do it.

建议: 回答较为完整，但有些口语化表达如"you know"重复使用，影响流畅性。建议减少口语填充词，使用更正式的表达。同时可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because there are many useful applications that help me organize my tasks efficiently.

× I don't like making leads and nowadays I usually shop online so I don't make a list, I just buy what I need on the Internet.

✓ I don't like making lists and nowadays I usually shop online so I don't make a list, I just buy what I need on the Internet.

这里的“leads”应为“lists”，因为“list”是可数名词，表示“清单”，复数形式应为“lists”。

× Yes I do make a list sometimes. You know when there are a lot of works I will try to plan them in a more proper way and I would say it works, it make me to deal with them better.

✓ Yes I do make a list sometimes. You know when there is a lot of work I will try to plan it in a more proper way and I would say it works, it helps me to deal with it better.

“works”在这里应为不可数名词“work”，表示“工作”，不可数名词不加复数形式。

× I would say it works, it make me to deal with them better.

✓ I would say it works, it makes me deal with them better.

主语“it”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，故“make”应改为“makes”。另外，“make me to deal”中的“to”应去掉，正确用法是“make sb do sth”。

× I'm a I'm one of the people who don't like making leads, and it seems to me that the main reason is that making leads take so many times to do it and I for me, I just. Too lazy to do it.

✓ I'm one of the people who don't like making lists, and it seems to me that the main reason is that making lists takes so much time to do it and I, for me, am just too lazy to do it.

“leads”应为“lists”，表示“清单”的复数形式。动词“take”应与主语“making lists”保持一致，改为“takes”。“so many times”应改为“so much time”，因为“time”是不可数名词。

× I just buy what I need on the Internet.

✓ I just buy what I need from the Internet.

表示从网络购买东西，常用介词“from”，而不是“on”。

× with the development of the technology nowadays we can find various applications on our phones to help us to make a list like, you know, the To Do List or some applications like that.

✓ with the development of technology nowadays we can find various applications on our phones to help us make a list like, you know, the To Do List or some applications like that.

“the technology”中的“the”不必要，通常说“development of technology”。另外，“help us to make”中的“to”可以省略，更自然。