列表— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Sure, I like to make a list when I shop shop because it can make me clear to know which product I need to buy and I will have clearly expensive to know.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Yeah, I always make a list for my work because it can help me know umm, which, which job I have did and uh, which important job I have not did and it it helped me a lot to make me clear.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
I think maybe some people think it's too difficult to make a list and it it was a waste of time way to make a list.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
Definitely on my phone because in the electronic and Internet mode I think no one will carry the paper everywhere. So if you make down the list on your phone, you can check the list when whenever.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分数: 60.0建议: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地说明你喜欢列购物清单的原因，并避免重复。
示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy and manage my budget effectively.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分数: 65.0建议: 回答中有语法错误和口语填充词，建议使用正确的时态和更流畅的表达，同时用连接词使句子更连贯。
示例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me keep track of completed tasks and reminds me of important jobs I still need to do.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分数: 55.0建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议用更准确的句子结构表达观点，并避免重复。
示例: Some people may dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or unnecessary.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分数: 70.0建议: 回答较为自然，但有语法和表达不够准确的问题。建议简洁表达偏好，并用连词使句子更流畅。
示例: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can access it anytime without carrying paper.
语法
× I always make a list for my work because it can help me know umm, which, which job I have did and uh, which important job I have not did and it it helped me a lot to make me clear.
✓ I always make a list for my work because it can help me know, umm, which job I have done and which important job I have not done, and it has helped me a lot to make things clear.
这里的'did'是动词的过去式，但在完成时态中应使用过去分词'done'。完成时态结构是'have/has + 过去分词'，表示动作已经完成。
× I always make a list for my work because it can help me know umm, which, which job I have did and uh, which important job I have not did and it it helped me a lot to make me clear.
✓ I always make a list for my work because it can help me know, umm, which job I have done and which important job I have not done, and it has helped me a lot to make things clear.
同上，'have not did'应改为'have not done'，保持完成时态的正确形式。
× I think maybe some people think it's too difficult to make a list and it it was a waste of time way to make a list.
✓ I think maybe some people think it's too difficult to make a list and it is a waste of time to make a list.
这里的'was'使用了过去时，但句子表达的是一般现在时的观点，应使用'is'。另外，'waste of time way'结构不正确，应简化为'waste of time'。
× Definitely on my phone because in the electronic and Internet mode I think no one will carry the paper everywhere.
✓ Definitely on my phone because in the electronic and Internet era, I think no one will carry paper everywhere.
'mode'用法不当，应该用'era'表示时代。'carry the paper'中'the'不必要，应为'carry paper'。
× So if you make down the list on your phone, you can check the list when whenever.
✓ So if you write down the list on your phone, you can check the list whenever you want.
'make down'不是正确的短语，应使用'write down'表示写下。'when whenever'重复，应简化为'whenever you want'。
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