列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence and add one or two specific reasons using linking words to improve coherence.

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me organize what I need to buy and avoid unnecessary purchases.

建议: Avoid repeating the same ideas and words. Use linking words to connect your points and provide specific examples to support your answer.

示例: Yes, I make lists for work and studying because they help me organize my tasks efficiently and plan my day better.

建议: Improve clarity by using simpler and more precise language. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid vague expressions.

示例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they think it takes too much time or they prefer to remember things mentally instead.

建议: Make your answer clearer by structuring it with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to contrast your preferences and avoid hesitation sounds.

示例: It depends on the situation. For studying, I prefer making lists on paper because it helps me remember better. However, for shopping, I usually use my phone for convenience.

× I use, I always do a list when I go to the shopping that helps me to organize my ideas and organize what I should buy and what I should not take.

✓ I use, I always make a list when I go shopping; that helps me organize my ideas and decide what I should buy and what I should not take.

The phrase 'do a list' is incorrect; the correct verb collocation is 'make a list'. Also, 'go to the shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' without 'the'. These are common verb + -ing form usage errors.

× I always do a list for my work, for my studying.

✓ I always make a list for my work and my studying.

The phrase 'do a list' is incorrect; 'make a list' is the correct collocation. Also, 'for my studying' is acceptable but 'for studying' is more natural. The preposition 'for' is correctly used here, but the verb choice is wrong.

× So this, this helps me a lot to be more organizer and to be a good planner.

✓ So this helps me a lot to be more organized and to be a good planner.

The word 'organizer' is a noun, but the sentence requires an adjective to describe the state of being organized. The correct adjective is 'organized'. This is an incorrect use of adjectives.

× Well, in my point of view, I guess that's because they don't have the time to do it or maybe they see it not very helpful way to recognize.

✓ Well, in my point of view, I guess that's because they don't have the time to do it or maybe they don't see it as a very helpful way to remember.

The phrase 'see it not very helpful way to recognize' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'see it as a very helpful way to remember'. 'Recognize' is not appropriate here; 'remember' fits better. Also, the preposition 'as' is needed after 'see it'.

× So they prefer to just like save it in their minds and in the memory and they so that's it in my opinion.

✓ So they prefer to just save it in their minds and memory, and that's it in my opinion.

The phrase 'and they so that's it' is ungrammatical and redundant. Also, 'in the memory' is better as 'in memory' without 'the'. The sentence structure needs correction for clarity.

× Actually it depends if sometimes if I want like studying, I prefer to do the list on paper.

✓ Actually, it depends. Sometimes, if I want to study, I prefer to make the list on paper.

The phrase 'if I want like studying' is incorrect; it should be 'if I want to study'. Also, 'do the list' is incorrect; 'make the list' is correct. The sentence structure is improved by splitting into two sentences.

× That's helped me a lot to to recognize and save the information more in my in my brain.

✓ That helps me a lot to recognize and save the information better in my brain.

The phrase 'That's helped me' is past tense but context suggests present tense 'That helps me'. Also, 'to to recognize' has a repeated 'to'. 'More in my in my brain' is redundant; 'better in my brain' is clearer.

× But sometimes when I want to like to go shopping or something else that doesn't doesn't relate to work or job or study.

✓ But sometimes, when I want to go shopping or do something else that doesn't relate to work, job, or study.

The phrase 'want to like to go shopping' is incorrect; 'want to go shopping' is correct. Also, 'doesn't doesn't' is a repeated word. The sentence is incomplete and needs 'do' before 'something else' for clarity.