列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语言不够自然，有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇表达。

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, last week I wrote down milk and bread, so I didn't forget anything. Making lists saves me time and keeps me organized.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意句子结构的完整性。

示例: Yes, I usually write a to-do list on a piece of paper and stick it on my desk. I check it regularly to make sure I complete all my tasks on time.

建议: 表达中存在语法错误和用词不当，建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，避免重复，增强表达的逻辑性。

示例: Some people dislike making lists because organizing many tasks at once can be overwhelming and stressful. They may also feel it's a waste of time if the list doesn't help them stay organized.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和词汇，确保表达连贯自然。

示例: I prefer making lists on paper and putting them on my desk because I can see them easily. I tried using my phone for lists, but I often forget to check them after a while.

× Yes, I'm used to make a list about what I need to do on a piece of paper, pasting them on my desk and I will check them check it from time to time, making sure that everything I need to do can be finished in time.

✓ Yes, I'm used to making a list about what I need to do on a piece of paper, pasting them on my desk and I will check them from time to time, making sure that everything I need to do can be finished in time.

“used to”后面应该接动名词形式（making），而不是动词原形（make）。这是固定搭配，表示习惯做某事。

× Yes, I'm used to make a list about what I need to do on a piece of paper, pasting them on my desk and I will check them check it from time to time, making sure that everything I need to do can be finished in time.

✓ Yes, I'm used to making a list about what I need to do on a piece of paper, pasting it on my desk and I will check it from time to time, making sure that everything I need to do can be finished in time.

“a list”是单数，后面指代它的代词应为单数“it”，而不是复数“them”。

× I usually make a list about what I want to buy before my shopping because I may forget them when I'm busy next time.

✓ I usually make a list of what I want to buy before my shopping because I may forget them when I'm busy next time.

固定搭配是“make a list of”，而不是“make a list about”。

× I usually make a list about what I want to buy before my shopping because I may forget them when I'm busy next time.

✓ I usually make a list of what I want to buy before my shopping because I may forget it when I'm busy next time.

“a list”是单数，指代时应使用单数代词“it”，而不是复数“them”。

× It indeed reminds me a box of milk so that it saves me many essential time.

✓ It indeed reminds me to buy a box of milk so that it saves me a lot of essential time.

“remind sb. to do sth.”是正确用法，原句缺少“to buy”；“many essential time”搭配错误，time是不可数名词，应使用“a lot of”或“much”。

× It indeed reminds me a box of milk so that it saves me many essential time.

✓ It indeed reminds me to buy a box of milk so that it saves me a lot of essential time.

“time”是不可数名词，不能用“many”，应使用“a lot of”或“much”。

× Some people don't like making lists because they find it a hard work to organize so many tasks at once.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they find it hard work to organize so many tasks at once.

“work”是不可数名词，前面不加冠词“a”。

× Also, they must think a waste of time because it may not help.

✓ Also, they must think it a waste of time because it may not help.

“think”后面接宾语和宾语补足语，宾语应为“it”，而不是省略。

× I prefer to make a list of all piece of paper and put it on my desk.

✓ I prefer to make a list on a piece of paper and put it on my desk.

“piece”是单数，前面应加不定冠词“a”，且“of all piece of paper”结构错误，应为“on a piece of paper”。

× I have made a list on my phone but it's just be fine about two weeks later.

✓ I have made a list on my phone but it was just fine for about two weeks.

“it's just be fine”时态错误，应为过去时“it was just fine”；“about two weeks later”表达不当，应为“for about two weeks”。