列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构和时态使用不够准确，且表达略显重复。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复表达，并尝试使用更自然的表达方式。

示例: Yes, I usually make a list in my mind rather than on paper because I often come up with new ideas while shopping, and writing a list might limit my flexibility.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且句子较长且重复。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和语法，表达更清晰。

示例: I have made lists at work a few times because I read online that it helps improve efficiency. However, I don't do it often since my plans can change during work.

建议: 回答中表达有些重复且语法不够准确。建议使用更简洁的句子，避免重复，并注意语法的正确性。

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it restricts their time and reduces flexibility, which makes them uncomfortable.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不流畅的问题。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

示例: I prefer making lists on paper because writing by hand helps me feel calm and think more clearly about what I need to do, making the list more suitable for my situation.

× I think I make a kind of list.

✓ I think I make a kind of list.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× So make a paper list will usually limit my thinking.

✓ So making a paper list will usually limit my thinking.

动词后接动名词形式表示动作作为主语或宾语，故应使用making而非make。

× I do do make a list a couple of times when I was working because I saw in the in the Internet that people always say I make a list.

✓ I did make a list a couple of times when I was working because I saw on the Internet that people always say I make a list.

过去时态中助动词应为did，且介词搭配应为on the Internet。

× I saw in the in the Internet that people always say I make a list.

✓ I saw on the Internet that people always say I make a list.

固定搭配是see on the Internet，不能用in。

× It's very useful at work, it can make our work more effectively.

✓ It's very useful at work, it can make our work more effective.

effectively是副词，修饰动词；此处应使用形容词effective修饰名词work。

× But I won't do that too much time because maybe I will change my idea when I was working so it live in me too.

✓ But I didn't do that too many times because maybe I would change my mind when I was working so it lived in me too.

过去时态中应使用did，too much time用于不可数名词，次数应使用too many times；will改为would表示过去将来时；live应为过去式lived。

× I think maybe it's because they have the same problem with me.

✓ I think maybe it's because they have the same problem as me.

固定搭配是have the same problem as sb.，不能用with。

× They always think make a list will limit their time and make them feel not very comfortable and then make their time not that flexible.

✓ They always think making a list will limit their time and make them feel uncomfortable and then make their time less flexible.

动词后应接动名词making；feel后接形容词uncomfortable；比较级用less flexible。

× I prefer make a list on the paper because I enjoy the feeling that I write the thing on the paper.

✓ I prefer making a list on paper because I enjoy the feeling that I write things on paper.

prefer后应接动名词making；the thing改为复数things；on the paper改为on paper更自然。

× better this list is compare with my situation.

✓ this list is better compared with my situation.

比较结构应为be better compared with，且顺序调整使句子通顺。