列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和重复，影响了表达的自然流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意语法正确性。

示例: Yes, definitely. I usually make a list when I shop because I have a bad memory. Also, it helps me stay within my budget and manage my money effectively.

建议: 回答内容较完整，但句子结构重复，且部分表达不够简洁。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时避免重复表达。

示例: Yes, of course. In the past, I often missed deadlines because I didn't make lists. However, after I started making lists, I found it very useful for managing my time and completing my work on schedule.

建议: 回答中有较多语法错误和口语填充词，影响表达清晰。建议减少口语填充词，理清句子结构，并使用更准确的词汇。

示例: I think some people trust their memory and don't feel the need to make lists. Also, they may believe that making lists is a waste of time.

建议: 回答表达了观点，但存在语法和用词错误。建议注意介词和动词形式的正确使用，同时使表达更简洁自然。

示例: I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy crossing off items. Writing on paper also helps me remember better than using my phone.

× I hand I have a bad memory and making a list also can help me to stay within the budget which means I can manage my money.

✓ I have a bad memory and making a list also can help me to stay within the budget which means I can manage my money.

句中多余的“hand”是多余的单词，应删除以保持句子通顺。

× I usually make a list when I shop to give me a reminder because I hand I have a bad memory and making a list also can help me to stay within the budget which means I can manage my money.

✓ I usually make a list when I shop to give myself a reminder because I have a bad memory and making a list also can help me to stay within the budget which means I can manage my money.

“give me a reminder”中应使用反身代词“myself”，表示给自己提醒。

× And it is very useful for me because in the past actually I didn't make a list so that I always I always missed the deadline.

✓ And it is very useful for me because in the past actually I didn't make a list so I always missed the deadline.

“so that”用法不当，应改为“so”表示结果关系。

× I think that, and some individual have confidence about their, about their memory so that they would not, uh, result or they would not resort to making into make a list.

✓ I think that some individuals have confidence about their memory so they would not resort to making a list.

“some individual”应为复数“some individuals”，且“result or they would not resort to making into make a list”表达混乱，应简化为“would not resort to making a list”。

× And, uh, maybe they also think, uh, making mist is actions and wasting that wasted time.

✓ And maybe they also think making lists is a waste of time.

“making mist is actions and wasting that wasted time”表达不清，应改为“making lists is a waste of time”更准确。

× For me, I prefer making a list on paper because I like the feeling to crossing items from the paper, and I think writing down signs on paper is much more useful for me to memory than just jotting down on the mobile phones.

✓ For me, I prefer making a list on paper because I like the feeling of crossing items off the paper, and I think writing down signs on paper is much more useful for me to remember than just jotting down on mobile phones.

“the feeling to crossing”应为“the feeling of crossing”，“to memory”应为“to remember”，表达更准确。