列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá đầy đủ và rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh lặp từ và câu hơi dài dòng. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và giữ câu trả lời trong khoảng 3-5 câu ngắn gọn.

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before going to the store because it helps me remember all the items I need. This way, I stay organized and avoid buying unnecessary things, which saves me money. Overall, it makes shopping much easier and more efficient.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ như 'a organized persons' nên là 'an organized person'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I am an organized person and I always make a daily to-do list. It helps me focus on my work and complete my tasks efficiently. Making lists is very convenient and improves my productivity.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng nhưng cách diễn đạt chưa rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy cố gắng diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách logic và cụ thể hơn.

示例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they prefer not to focus on a fixed plan. Also, some can remember their tasks without writing them down, so they think making lists wastes time.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'I am prefer' nên là 'I prefer'. Câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có liên kết giữa các ý. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

示例: I prefer making lists on paper because it helps me remember and prioritize my tasks. Using paper is easier and more convenient for me since I am a traditional person.

× Shop Yes.

✓ Yes, I do.

The original sentence 'Shop Yes.' is not a proper sentence structure. It lacks a subject and verb in correct order. The correct response to the question 'Do you make a list when you shop?' is 'Yes, I do.' which is a complete and grammatically correct sentence.

× I always make a list for the whole day what I'm going to do because it's helped me to focus on my working and it's also helped me to to finish my task and very convenient, yes.

✓ I always make a list for the whole day of what I'm going to do because it helps me to focus on my work and it also helps me to finish my tasks. It's very convenient, yes.

The original sentence has incorrect pronoun use and verb tense inconsistency. 'It's helped me' should be 'it helps me' to match present tense. 'My working' is incorrect; 'my work' is correct. Also, 'to to finish' is a typo. The sentence is also run-on and needs to be split for clarity.

× Actually, in my opinion, I think people, they don't want to focus on something that you gonna do.

✓ Actually, in my opinion, I think people don't want to focus on something they are going to do.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes pronouns 'people, they' and uses informal 'gonna'. The pronouns should be consistent and formal: 'people don't want to focus on something they are going to do.'

× And some, for example, some people, they can't remember what they want to do in whole days.

✓ For example, some people can't remember what they want to do throughout the whole day.

The sentence has redundant pronouns 'some people, they' and awkward phrasing 'in whole days'. It should be 'some people can't remember what they want to do throughout the whole day.'

× I can remember. So they don't need to make a list for a day.

✓ I can remember, so they don't need to make a list for the day.

The phrase 'for a day' is less natural than 'for the day' when referring to a specific day. Also, the sentence is better combined with a comma for flow.

× And it's maybe it's waste their time though.

✓ And maybe it's a waste of their time though.

The original sentence has redundant 'it's' and incorrect verb form 'waste' without article. Correct form is 'it's a waste of their time.'

× Actually I am a traditional person so I am prefer making list in the paper because help me to remember what I'm going to do and what I am to prioritize and do it first.

✓ Actually, I am a traditional person, so I prefer making lists on paper because it helps me remember what I'm going to do and what I need to prioritize and do first.

The sentence has incorrect verb form 'I am prefer' which should be 'I prefer'. 'Making list' should be plural 'making lists'. 'In the paper' should be 'on paper'. Also, missing subject in 'help me' corrected to 'it helps me'. 'What I am to prioritize' is awkward; better as 'what I need to prioritize'.

× And I think is easier to use when I when I use paper it's convenient.

✓ And I think it is easier to use paper; it's convenient.

The sentence is missing the subject 'it' before 'is easier'. The phrase 'when I when I use paper' is repetitive and awkward. Simplified to 'I think it is easier to use paper; it's convenient.'