列表— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Absolutely. Before I go to shop, I want to make A to do list or A to buy list. You know, it can remind me what to buy.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Of course, As for working, I always make A to do list in this way. Well, you know, I can have a schedule to arrange my work and my spare time.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
Well, it's hard to say. Umm, I suppose some people may think it's too tedious. You know, they it may takes their some time to put them down.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
Umm, it's hard to say. As for me, well, I maybe choose to write them down on my phone. One of the main reasons is that I carry my phone around me all day long and if I choose to use a paper, I maybe forgot it.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分数: 70.0建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“make A to do list or A to buy list”应为“make a to-do list or a shopping list”。建议注意冠词的使用和表达的自然流畅。
示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember everything I need to buy.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分数: 65.0建议: 回答中语法错误较多，如“make A to do list”应为“make a to-do list”，且表达不够连贯。建议使用更自然的句式，并用连接词使回答更流畅。
示例: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks and manage my time effectively.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分数: 60.0建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“they it may takes their some time to put them down”不符合英语表达习惯。建议简化句子结构，避免重复和语法错误。
示例: Some people might find making lists boring or time-consuming, so they prefer not to do it.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分数: 65.0建议: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“I maybe choose”应为“I might choose”，且句子结构较为混乱。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子。
示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so I won't forget my list.
语法
× Before I go to shop, I want to make A to do list or A to buy list.
✓ Before I go shopping, I want to make a to-do list or a to-buy list.
这里的“a”应该小写，且“to do list”应写作“to-do list”，表示“待办事项清单”，同理“to buy list”应为“to-buy list”。另外，“go to shop”应改为“go shopping”，因为“go shopping”是固定搭配，表示去购物。
× As for working, I always make A to do list in this way.
✓ As for working, I always make a to-do list in this way.
“A”应小写为“a”，且“to do list”应写作“to-do list”，表示“待办事项清单”。
× You know, they it may takes their some time to put them down.
✓ You know, it may take them some time to put them down.
原句中“they it”重复且错误，应去掉“they”；“may takes”中“takes”应为原形“take”，因为情态动词后动词用原形；“their some time”顺序错误，应为“some time”。
× I maybe choose to write them down on my phone.
✓ I may choose to write them down on my phone.
“maybe”是副词，表示“也许”，而这里需要情态动词“may”表示可能性，故应改为“may”。
× One of the main reasons is that I carry my phone around me all day long and if I choose to use a paper, I maybe forgot it.
✓ One of the main reasons is that I carry my phone around with me all day long, and if I choose to use paper, I may forget it.
“carry my phone around me”应为“carry my phone around with me”，表示“带着手机”；“use a paper”中“paper”不可数，前面不加冠词“a”；“maybe forgot”应为“may forget”，情态动词后用动词原形。
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