列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构较简单，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议加强语法准确性，使用连接词使回答更流畅。

示例: I usually don't make a list when I shop because it depends on my schedule. However, if I have more free time, I prefer to browse around without following a list.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，明确表达观点。

示例: Yes, I do make a list for my work, especially when the tasks are special or unusual. Writing them down helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything.

建议: 回答内容不清晰，词汇使用错误，表达混乱。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，清楚表达原因。

示例: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to follow their instincts and adapt to the situation rather than sticking to a fixed plan.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议注意动词形式和句子完整性，使用更自然的表达方式。

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can check them anytime and anywhere. However, I also carry a paper list in my bag as a backup.

× If I have more free time I just go around and not follow the list.

✓ If I have more free time, I just go around and do not follow the list.

这里缺少了助动词“do”来构成否定句，英语中一般现在时的否定需要使用“do not”或“don't”。

× Yes, I did. If the is special, not normal work, I'm had to take this and write it down.

✓ Yes, I did. If the work is special, not normal, I have to take it and write it down.

句中“I'm had to”是错误的时态和结构，应使用现在完成时或一般现在时“have to”表示必须做某事。

× If the is special, not normal work, I'm had to take this and write it down.

✓ If the work is special, not normal, I have to take it and write it down.

“the”后面缺少名词，应补充“work”以明确指代。

× I think the reason is is that people can follow their wounds and depends on their situation, not really by the least.

✓ I think the reason is that people can follow their wants and depend on their situation, not really by the list.

“is is”重复，应改为单一“is”；“wounds”应为“wants”表示“愿望”；“depends”应与主语“people”一致改为“depend”；“least”应为“list”。

× I think the reason is is that people can follow their wounds and depends on their situation, not really by the least.

✓ I think the reason is that people can follow their wants and depend on their situation, not really by the list.

“least”拼写错误，应为“list”，表示“清单”。

× I prefer make this on my phone because I can watch it or check it anytime anywhere.

✓ I prefer to make this on my phone because I can watch it or check it anytime, anywhere.

“prefer”后应接不定式“to make”；“anytime anywhere”之间应加逗号分隔。

× Now I follow a paper in my bag.

✓ Now I carry a paper in my bag.

“follow a paper”表达不正确，应使用“carry a paper”表示携带纸质清单。