列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够自然，存在语法错误，如“get used to make”应为“am used to making”。建议简化句子结构，避免冗长，使用更地道的表达。

示例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because there are many items to buy, and it helps me remember everything. Otherwise, I might forget something and have to return to the store.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误，如“forgot”应为“forget”，且表达不够流畅。建议使用更准确的时态和词汇，句子结构更清晰。

示例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because I often forget important tasks. For example, I need to complete my homework and send the results to my teacher to get feedback. Writing it down helps me remember.

建议: 回答内容不够清晰，语法和词汇错误较多，表达含糊。建议先理清思路，使用简单句表达观点，避免使用不准确的词汇，如“freestyle”和“chargeable”。

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it troublesome and prefer to finish tasks spontaneously. They might feel stressed if they have too many things planned. Also, some jobs are flexible and don't require strict scheduling.

建议: 回答表达了观点且内容较完整，但部分表达不够地道，如“at first”用法不当，且“record me to do something”不准确。建议使用更自然的连接词和表达方式。

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I can check my schedule anytime and anywhere. It's also easy to add or delete tasks, and the reminder feature helps me remember what to do.

× I get used to make a list for the reason that there are so many things that I have to purchase in order to ensure that I cannot forget one of them.

✓ I get used to making a list because there are so many things that I have to purchase to ensure that I don't forget any of them.

“get used to”后面应接动名词形式，因此“make”应改为“making”。另外，句子中“for the reason that”可以简化为“because”，使表达更自然。

× If I don't do that, I probably come back again.

✓ If I don't do that, I will probably come back again.

此处表示将来可能发生的动作，应使用将来时态“will probably come”，而不是一般现在时“probably come”。

× It's really useful to me since I often forgot something important.

✓ It's really useful to me since I often forget something important.

“often”表示经常发生的动作，应使用一般现在时“forget”，而不是过去时“forgot”。

× If I don't write this task on my list, I'm likely to forgot it as a result.

✓ If I don't write this task on my list, I'm likely to forget it as a result.

“be likely to”后应接动词原形，因此“forgot”应改为“forget”。

× They probably feel stressful when there are anything willing them to do.

✓ They probably feel stressed when there is anything they want to do.

“stressful”是形容词，表示“令人感到压力的”，应使用“stressed”表示“感到压力的”。“there are anything”错误，因“anything”是不可数或单数，应该用“there is anything”。另外，“willing them to do”表达不正确，应改为“they want to do”。

× Some people's job is chargeable that don't need any list to arrange.

✓ Some people's jobs are manageable and don't need any list to arrange.

“job”应与“people's”复数对应，改为“jobs”。“chargeable”用词不当，应改为“manageable”（可管理的）。句子结构不完整，需调整使表达更清晰。

× The most important thing is that it has reminder feature which can record me to do something.

✓ The most important thing is that it has a reminder feature which can remind me to do something.

“reminder feature”前应加冠词“a”。“record me to do something”表达错误，应改为“remind me to do something”。