列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

示例: I rarely make a shopping list myself, but my mom usually writes down everything she needs before going to the grocery store because there are many items to buy. This helps her stay organized and ensures she doesn't forget anything.

建议: Bạn nên hoàn thành câu trả lời và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, thêm chi tiết cụ thể và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I often use a calendar to organize my daily tasks, and I find it very helpful because it allows me to manage my work efficiently. Moreover, it helps me prioritize important activities and meet deadlines.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

示例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because unexpected events can occur during the day. Therefore, they prefer to stay flexible and handle tasks spontaneously without following a fixed list.

建议: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

示例: I prefer to use a calendar app on my phone rather than writing lists on paper because it's more convenient and less likely to be lost. Additionally, apps offer useful features like reminders and easy editing.

× I rarely do it, but I have seen my mom usually list listed everything before she go for a grocery because there are a lot of things, a lot of need that she have to buy.

✓ I rarely do it, but I have seen my mom usually list everything before she goes grocery shopping because there are a lot of things, a lot of needs that she has to buy.

The verb 'go' should be in the third person singular present tense 'goes' to agree with the subject 'she'. Also, 'have' should be 'has' for third person singular. 'List listed' is incorrect; 'list' alone is correct here. 'Go for a grocery' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go grocery shopping'. 'Need' should be plural 'needs' to match 'a lot of'.

× Therefore listed everything and arrange the thing that she had.

✓ Therefore, she listed everything and arranged the things that she had.

The verbs 'listed' and 'arrange' should both be in past tense to maintain consistency. 'Arrange' should be 'arranged'. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context. Adding 'she' clarifies the subject.

× I often use calendar to arrange everything that I have to do in a day and I found it really helpful for me because I can organize all the, I can organize all the work or the thing that I have to do and do it more effectively.

✓ I often use a calendar to arrange everything that I have to do in a day and I find it really helpful because I can organize all the work or the things that I have to do and do it more effectively.

The noun 'calendar' needs the indefinite article 'a' before it. 'Found' should be 'find' to match the present tense context. 'Thing' should be plural 'things' to match 'all the work'. The phrase 'for me' is unnecessary and can be omitted for clarity.

× Is more convenient to use a calendar app in instead of like write down all the thing on the paper because we easily to lose it.

✓ It is more convenient to use a calendar app instead of writing down all the things on paper because we can easily lose it.

The phrase 'in instead of like write down' is incorrect. The correct form is 'instead of writing down'. 'Thing' should be plural 'things'. 'On the paper' should be 'on paper'. 'We easily to lose it' should be 'we can easily lose it' to be grammatically correct.

× Moreover, right now using the app they are so convenient, they are so like functions like that that was collected.

✓ Moreover, right now using the app is so convenient; it has many useful functions that are included.

The subject 'using the app' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. 'They' is incorrect here; it should be 'it' referring to the app. 'Functions like that that was collected' is unclear and ungrammatical; it should be 'many useful functions that are included'.

× Therefore, because they just want to stay actively solve everything all day long.

✓ Therefore, because they just want to stay active and solve everything all day long.

The phrase 'stay actively solve' is incorrect. 'Actively' is an adverb but 'stay' requires an adjective, so 'active' is correct. Also, 'and' is needed to connect 'stay active' and 'solve everything'.

× Therefore they will like do all the tasks without a list.

✓ Therefore, they will like to do all the tasks without a list.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to do' rather than the bare verb 'do'.

× But I I think it's all so they they also have to keep.

✓ But I think it's because they also have to keep up with everything.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'because they also have to keep up with everything' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure. Also, repeated words 'I I' and 'they they' are removed.