列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Apni answer e beshi natural bhabe kotha bolte paren ebong unnecessary filler words (like 'uh') komate paren. Apnar uttor ke aro clear korte, prothome direct question er uttor din, tarpor supporting details din. Apni 'sometimes' er poriborte specific example dite paren. Ekhane linking word use korle uttor aro logical hobe.

示例: Yes, I sometimes make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need. However, occasionally I forget to prepare one, which makes shopping a bit stressful.

建议: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar error ache ebong sentence structure clear na. Apni prothome direct uttor din, tarpor karon bolun. Linking words use korle uttor bhalo hobe. Apni 'emergency work' er bodole 'urgent tasks' use korte paren. Details aro specific korben.

示例: Yes, I often make a list for my work because I have many urgent tasks that I must not forget. This helps me stay organized and complete my work efficiently.

建议: Apnar uttor e kichu spelling mistake ache (like 'fill' should be 'feel'). Apni prothome direct uttor din, tarpor karon bolun. Apni 'hassle' er bodole 'trouble' or 'bother' use korte paren. Uttor ke aro bistarito korte paren.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it is a hassle and takes extra time. Also, they might forget to prepare one before starting their tasks.

建议: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar and clarity problem ache. 'Keeps my beside' and 'get get my site' er mane clear na. Apni prothome preference bolun, tarpor karon. Linking words use korben. Apni 'maintain' er bodole 'keep' or 'make' use korte paren. Sentence structure simple rakhun.

示例: I prefer to make lists on paper because I find it easier to write and see everything clearly. However, nowadays I use my phone since it is always with me and more convenient.

× Honestly speaking that uh, sometimes I make a total list when I go to shop, but sometimes I forget to make it and maybe it's more comfortable to make a list for shop.

✓ Honestly speaking, sometimes I make a total list when I go shopping, but sometimes I forget to make it and maybe it's more comfortable to make a list for shopping.

The word 'shop' should be in its gerund form 'shopping' when used after 'go to' to indicate the activity. This is a common usage in English where 'go to' is followed by an -ing form to express an activity.

× Honestly speaking that uh, sometimes I make a total list when I go to shop, but sometimes I forget to make it and maybe it's more comfortable to make a list for shop.

✓ Honestly speaking, sometimes I make a total list when I go shopping, but sometimes I forget to make it and maybe it's more comfortable to make a list for shopping.

The preposition 'for' before 'shop' is incorrect here. It should be 'for shopping' to correctly express the purpose of making a list.

× Yes, sometimes I make a list for my work because most of the time I have an emergency work which I should not forget.

✓ Yes, sometimes I make a list for my work because most of the time I have emergency work which I should not forget.

The word 'work' is uncountable and should not be preceded by 'an'. Using 'an' implies countability which is incorrect here.

× That's why in case I forget those who are, I have to maintain it.

✓ That's why, in case I forget something, I have to keep it.

The original sentence is unclear and awkward. 'Those who are' is incorrect and does not fit the context. 'Maintain it' is also not appropriate here; 'keep it' or 'remember it' fits better. The sentence structure needs correction for clarity.

× Maybe they forget to make a list or they fill hassle to make it.

✓ Maybe they forget to make a list or they feel hassled to make it.

The word 'fill' is incorrect; it should be 'feel'. Also, 'hassle' is a noun, but here an adjective or past participle 'hassled' is appropriate to describe the feeling.

× I prefer to make a list on paper than my phone, but nowadays I have to maintain it on my phone because it always keeps my beside whenever I want it.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone, but nowadays I have to keep it on my phone because it is always by my side whenever I want it.

The phrase 'than my phone' should be 'rather than on my phone' to correctly compare two options. 'Maintain it on my phone' is incorrect; 'keep it on my phone' is better. 'Keeps my beside' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'by my side'.

× I easily get get my site that's why.

✓ I can easily access it, that's why.

The phrase 'get get my site' is unclear and incorrect. It likely means 'access it easily'. The sentence structure is incorrect and needs to be rewritten for clarity.