列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够简洁，表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用连贯的语言表达理由。

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me feel prepared and organized. It also ensures I don't forget anything important.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议使用更准确的句子结构，明确说明做列表的目的和效果。

示例: Yes, I make lists for my studies, especially during final exams. They help me organize my revision and focus on important topics, which improves my performance.

建议: 回答表达不流畅，语法错误较多，建议简化句子，清晰表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel confident managing tasks without them. Others think making lists is time-consuming and unnecessary.

建议: 回答中有语法和表达错误，最后一句不相关且含糊，建议去除无关内容，使用更准确的表达。

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I can type faster than writing by hand, which saves time. Also, I always have my phone with me, so it's very convenient.

× To be honest, when I was young I didn't have these habits, but my mom told me it's a good habit because it can let me feel prepared and it can make the least organized and learn more about what you need to buy.

✓ To be honest, when I was young I didn't have these habits, but my mom told me it's a good habit because it can help me feel prepared and make the list organized and help me learn more about what I need to buy.

原句中“can let me feel prepared”表达不自然，应该用“can help me feel prepared”更合适；“make the least organized”中的“least”应为“list”，且缺少动词搭配，改为“make the list organized”；“learn more about what you need to buy”中的“you”应改为“I”，保持主语一致。建议使用正确的动词搭配和主语一致性。

× Now when in the final of the terms I usually make a list on when review this course and what you need to learn.

✓ Now, in the final term, I usually make a list of when to review this course and what I need to learn.

原句中“when in the final of the terms”表达不清晰，应改为“in the final term”；“make a list on when review this course”结构错误，应为“make a list of when to review this course”；“what you need to learn”中的“you”应改为“I”，保持主语一致。建议注意代词一致性和正确的介词搭配。

× Because they may be confident about themselves, they know what to do next and when to do, where to do, how to do so.

✓ Because they may be confident about themselves; they know what to do next, when to do it, where to do it, and how to do it.

原句中“when to do, where to do, how to do so”缺少宾语，应补充“it”使句子完整；“how to do so”中的“so”不自然，改为“it”。建议注意动词后宾语的完整性。

× Or other people may just don't like do these things because they think May is difficult and waste of time.

✓ Or other people may just not like to do these things because they think it is difficult and a waste of time.

原句中“may just don't like do”语法错误，应为“may just not like to do”；“they think May is difficult”中的“May”应为“it”；“waste of time”前缺少冠词“a”。建议注意情态动词后否定形式和不定式的正确使用。

× Actually, I like to make a list on my phone because my typing speed is truly quicker than my writing speed and it can save some time.

✓ Actually, I like to make a list on my phone because my typing speed is truly faster than my writing speed and it can save some time.

原句中“typing speed is truly quicker”中“quicker”虽可用，但“faster”更常用且自然；“make a list on my phone”中“on”正确。建议选择更自然的形容词表达速度比较。

× Or so today I think everyone is always with a film.

✓ Or so today I think everyone always has a phone with them.

原句“everyone is always with a film”语义不明，推测为“phone”误写为“film”，且“with a film”表达不自然，应改为“has a phone with them”。建议注意单词拼写和表达的准确性。