列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'um'. For example, you can say: "I usually don't make a shopping list, but sometimes I do. For instance, I use the notes app on my phone to list grocery items that have run out in my kitchen."

示例: I usually don't make a shopping list, but sometimes I do. For instance, I use the notes app on my phone to list grocery items that have run out in my kitchen.

建议: Your answer should directly respond to the question with a clear statement. Here, you did not provide an answer. Try to answer with a topic sentence and supporting details. For example: "Yes, I make lists for my work, and they help me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently."

示例: Yes, I make lists for my work, and they help me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently.

建议: Try to speak more clearly and avoid filler words. Structure your answer with a topic sentence and supporting reasons using linking words. For example: "Some people dislike making lists because their workplaces are hectic, and they get easily distracted. Moreover, they tend to postpone tasks, which prevents them from creating lists."

示例: Some people dislike making lists because their workplaces are hectic, and they get easily distracted. Moreover, they tend to postpone tasks, which prevents them from creating lists.

建议: Make your answer clearer and more coherent by using linking words and avoiding filler words. Start with a clear preference and explain why. For example: "I prefer making lists on my phone because it's faster and more convenient. In today's busy life, carrying pen and paper is less practical, especially for grocery lists or weekly plans."

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's faster and more convenient. In today's busy life, carrying pen and paper is less practical, especially for grocery lists or weekly plans.

× Mostly I don't, but sometimes I do make list, uh, I make lists like on my phone notes app I used to mail, uh, I used to write the things that are finished at my kitchen like grocery stuff and all.

✓ Mostly I don't, but sometimes I do make lists, uh, I make lists like on my phone notes app I used to mail, uh, I used to write the things that are finished at my kitchen like grocery stuff and all.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because the speaker refers to making multiple lists, not just one. Using the singular form here is incorrect when talking about more than one list.

× I used to write the things that are finished at my kitchen like grocery stuff and all.

✓ I used to write the things that are finished in my kitchen like grocery stuff and all.

The correct preposition to indicate location inside a place is 'in' rather than 'at'. 'At my kitchen' is incorrect; it should be 'in my kitchen' to properly express the location.

× And it also depends upon the work we are at least we are making for uh, like for grocery items or anything like uh, even list week.

✓ And it also depends on the work we are doing; at least we are making lists for, uh, like grocery items or anything like, uh, even last week.

The phrase 'depends upon' is less common and 'depends on' is preferred. Also, the original sentence is unclear and missing verbs; adding 'doing' clarifies the meaning. 'Making for' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists for'. 'List week' seems to be a mishearing or typo and is corrected to 'last week' for clarity.