列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，建议使用更准确的时态和表达方式，并避免重复和不连贯的句子。

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list. First, I categorize the items I need. However, sometimes I buy things spontaneously, which makes shopping enjoyable for me.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用正确的时态和词汇，清晰表达计划和结果，避免使用不明词汇。

示例: Yes, I make a list of tasks every Monday for the week. On Friday, I review what I have completed, which helps me stay organized and productive.

建议: 回答表达混乱，语法错误较多，建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用恰当的连接词使句子连贯。

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to do things spontaneously. Also, writing lists can feel stressful and make life seem more burdensome.

建议: 回答中有语法和表达不清的问题，建议使用完整句子，明确比较两者的优缺点，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: Nowadays, I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and easy to access. However, I also enjoy writing lists on paper sometimes because it feels more personal.

× Yes I do, in fact I like make a list half and half.

✓ Yes I do, in fact I like making a list half and half.

动词后面接动名词形式，like后面应接making而不是make。

× First I like make some big category.

✓ First I like making some big categories.

like后面应接动名词making；category应使用复数categories，表示多个类别。

× Then when I shop I like random buy something I don't need.

✓ Then when I shop I like to randomly buy something I don't need.

random是形容词，副词形式应为randomly；动词like后接不定式to do或动名词doing，这里用to randomly buy更合适。

× But I enjoy the feel and it makes me very happy.

✓ But I enjoy the feeling and it makes me very happy.

feel是动词，名词形式应为feeling，表示感觉。

× Yes I do. When I go for a company I like write down the work I need to do for the the week on Monday and at the Friday I will Hua diao the the thing I have done but it may make me very rich.

✓ Yes I do. When I go to a company I like to write down the work I need to do for the week on Monday and on Friday I will tick off the things I have done but it may make me very rich.

go后接介词to表示去某地；like后接不定式to write；'at the Friday'应为'on Friday'；'Hua diao'应译为'tick off'；'the the'为重复错误；'thing'应为复数'things'。

× When I go for a company

✓ When I go to a company

go后面表示去某地应使用介词to，而不是for。

× at the Friday

✓ on Friday

表示具体日期或星期时，介词应为on，而不是at。

× In my eyes people like doing things like do things like doing things for randomly and it's hard to write correct tests and when write down the list it's make people feel pressure and the life is heavier when right.

✓ In my opinion, people like doing things randomly and it's hard to write correct tests. When writing down the list, it makes people feel pressured and life feels heavier.

表达观点用In my opinion更合适；'like do things like doing things for randomly'语序和用词错误，改为'like doing things randomly'；'when write down the list'应为'when writing down the list'；'it's make'应为'it makes'；'feel pressure'应为'feel pressured'；'the life is heavier when right'表达不清，改为'life feels heavier'。

× and when write down the list it's make people feel pressure

✓ and when writing down the list it makes people feel pressured

when后应接动名词writing；主谓一致，it makes；feel pressure应为feel pressured。

× Hmm yes today on the new I like writing on my phone is more convenient and and I always see the list on the file and do.

✓ Hmm yes, nowadays I like writing on my phone because it is more convenient and I always see the list on the file and do it.

表达时间用nowadays更合适；句子缺少连词because；补充it使句子完整。

× and and I always see the list on the file and do.

✓ and I always see the list on the file and do it.

重复使用and，应去掉一个；句子末尾缺少宾语it。

× But I enjoy writing paper too.

✓ But I enjoy writing on paper too.

写作时应使用介词on paper，而不是直接用paper。