列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but needs to be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. For example, say 'I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget items, which makes me regret later.'

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget what I need, and that often makes me regret when I get home.

建议: Try to avoid repetition and improve grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, 'Yes, I always make a list at work because I tend to forget important tasks, and this helps me avoid regrets later.'

示例: Yes, I always make a list at work because I tend to forget important tasks, and this helps me avoid regrets later.

建议: Your answer is unclear and has grammar mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words. For example, 'Some people find making lists difficult or boring, even though it helps those who tend to forget things.'

示例: Some people find making lists difficult or boring, even though it helps those who tend to forget things.

建议: Your answer is fragmented and unclear. Use complete sentences and link ideas logically. For example, 'I prefer making lists on paper because phones can be lost, but paper lists are easy to carry in pockets.'

示例: I prefer making lists on paper because phones can be lost, but paper lists are easy to carry in pockets.

× Yes, whenever I go to shopping I do make a list because I have one bad habit which is I really forgot to buy what was I was supposed to buy that really make me regret after I came home.

✓ Yes, whenever I go shopping I do make a list because I have one bad habit which is I really forget to buy what I was supposed to buy and that really makes me regret it after I come home.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the verb 'go' should be followed directly by the gerund 'shopping' without 'to'. Also, 'forgot' should be in present tense 'forget' to match the habitual action. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'that'. 'Was I was' is redundant; it should be 'I was'. 'Came' should be 'come' to maintain present tense consistency.

× This often make me regret it later when I realize I miss something to do or make which I have to work.

✓ This often makes me regret it later when I realize I missed something to do or make which I have to work on.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'This'. 'Miss' should be past tense 'missed' to indicate a completed action. The phrase 'which I have to work' is incomplete; it should be 'which I have to work on' for clarity.

× The people who have a forgetting habits, it will for them it will be a best thing to make a list, but somewhere it's really brother think.

✓ For people who have a habit of forgetting, it will be the best thing to make a list, but sometimes it's really a bother to think about.

'A forgetting habits' is incorrect; it should be 'a habit of forgetting' or 'forgetting habits'. The phrase 'it will for them it will be' is redundant and confusing; simplified to 'it will be'. 'Brother think' is incorrect; likely meant 'bother to think'. 'Somewhere' should be 'sometimes'.

× Most of the time I prefer to make a list on paper because we never trust our phone.

✓ Most of the time I prefer to make a list on paper because I never trust my phone.

The pronouns 'we' and 'our' are inconsistent with the singular subject 'I'. They should be 'I' and 'my' to maintain subject consistency.

× It would be lost, people will be also lost.

✓ It could be lost, and people could also lose it.

The original sentence is unclear and structurally incorrect. 'It would be lost' is vague; 'could be lost' is better. 'People will be also lost' is incorrect; likely intended 'people could also lose it'. The sentence needs conjunction 'and' to connect ideas properly.