列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami serta efektif. Hindari pengulangan kata dan perbaiki struktur kalimat agar lebih jelas dan langsung ke inti jawaban.

示例: I usually don't make a shopping list unless I'm planning to cook. In that case, I write a detailed list on paper or on my phone to make sure I buy all the ingredients.

建议: Perbaiki pengulangan kata dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dengan jelas. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren dan mudah dipahami.

示例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks. This way, I don't miss anything during the day and can achieve all my goals efficiently.

建议: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan buat kalimat yang lebih jelas dan terstruktur. Hindari pengulangan dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk menjelaskan alasan dengan lebih baik.

示例: I think some people dislike making lists because they are spontaneous and prefer to act immediately without planning. They might find it easier to do things directly rather than organizing tasks in a list.

建议: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan buat kalimat yang lebih alami dan jelas. Gunakan struktur kalimat yang tepat dan hindari kesalahan kata untuk menyampaikan alasan dengan efektif.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. This way, it's more convenient and I won't forget the tasks I've already added.

× If I plan to cooking something I will make a more detailed list in a a paper or in my phone I think.

✓ If I plan to cook something, I will make a more detailed list on a paper or on my phone, I think.

The verb 'plan to' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'plan to cooking' is incorrect; it should be 'plan to cook'. Also, 'in a a paper' should be corrected to 'on a paper' and 'in my phone' to 'on my phone' for correct preposition usage.

× If I plan to cooking something I will make a more detailed list in a a paper or in my phone I think.

✓ If I plan to cook something, I will make a more detailed list on a paper or on my phone, I think.

The correct preposition for writing or making a list is 'on' rather than 'in'. So, it should be 'on a paper' and 'on my phone' instead of 'in a paper' and 'in my phone'.

× Yes I do because if I make a list I will I will know which priority I need to do first so I will not miss anything for a day and it will be better because I will just get all the goals.

✓ Yes, I do because if I make a list, I will know which priority I need to do first so I will not miss anything for the day and it will be better because I will just get all the goals.

The sentence is mostly correct but needs punctuation for clarity. No verb + -ing form error here, but the sentence benefits from commas. Also, 'for a day' should be 'for the day' to specify the time period.

× I think because they just not they, they are just spontaneous people that maybe it is easier for them to do it directly and no need to make a list.

✓ I think it's because they are just spontaneous people and maybe it is easier for them to do things directly without needing to make a list.

The phrase 'they just not they' is incorrect and unclear. It should be rephrased for clarity. Also, 'no need to make a list' should be 'without needing to make a list' to correctly express the idea.

× I will be able to make a list in my phone because I carry my phone when it wherever I go so it is more comfortable and I will not forget that I already put in myself.

✓ I am able to make a list on my phone because I carry my phone wherever I go, so it is more convenient and I will not forget what I have already put in.

The phrase 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone' for correct preposition use. 'When it wherever I go' is incorrect; it should be 'wherever I go'. 'I will not forget that I already put in myself' is unclear and should be 'I will not forget what I have already put in' to correctly express the idea.