列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够自然，存在语法错误，如“used to shopping”应为“used to shopping online”或“used to shop online”。回答较长且有些冗余，建议简洁表达并注意语法。

示例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer shopping online and just buy what I need.

建议: 回答中时态混用（'I'll make'和'when I was'），表达不够准确。建议使用正确时态，简洁明了地表达观点，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: Yes, I make lists when I have many deadlines because they help me plan my work better and complete tasks efficiently.

建议: 回答较完整，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误，如缺少主语。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it difficult and are unsure about what they want or need to do.

建议: 回答表达清晰，但存在语法错误，如“make list”应为“make lists”，以及“better than make this”应为“better than making them”。建议注意动词形式和表达的准确性。

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because there are many useful and convenient apps, which I think are better than using paper.

× I just used to shopping online.

✓ I just used to shopping online.

此句中 'used to' 后应接动词原形，正确表达应为 'I just used to shop online.' 但因题目要求只纠正列出的语法错误类型，且 'Verb + -ing form' 是其中之一，故指出此处错误。

× I just used to shopping online.

✓ I just used to shop online.

'used to' 后应接动词原形，不能接动名词形式。正确用法是 'used to shop'，表示过去常做某事。

× I just buy what I need.

✓ I just buy what I need.

此句无 'Verb + -ing form' 错误，保持原句。

× Yes, I'll make this when I was troubled with so many deadlines and I would say it works since the list can help me to plan my work and I can better solve this.

✓ Yes, I made this when I was troubled with so many deadlines and I would say it works since the list can help me to plan my work and I can better solve this.

句中 'I'll make'（将来时）与后文 'when I was troubled'（过去时）时态不一致，应改为过去时 'I made'。

× I can better solve this.

✓ I can better solve it.

'this' 用于指示近处事物，通常指具体名词，句中应使用宾格代词 'it' 来指代前文提到的事情。

× Well, in my opinion that because they think making lists is difficult since they don't know how to make a list and they don't know clearly what they want or what they need to do.

✓ Well, in my opinion, it's because they think making lists is difficult since they don't know how to make a list and they don't clearly know what they want or what they need to do.

句中缺少主语和谓语，'that because' 结构不正确，应改为 'it's because'。此外，'don't know clearly' 语序不当，应改为 'don't clearly know'。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone.

此句中 'on my phone' 介词使用正确，无需修改。

× Nowadays there are many useful and convenient apps for us to make list and I think it is better than make this on paper.

✓ Nowadays there are many useful and convenient apps for us to make lists and I think it is better than making them on paper.

'make list' 应为复数 'make lists'，且比较结构中 'better than make this' 应改为 'better than making them'，保持动名词形式和代词一致。