列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but you can improve by correcting minor grammatical errors and avoiding redundancy. For example, instead of saying "writing down on paper," say "writing on paper." Also, avoid repeating similar ideas like convenience multiple times. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list on my mobile phone because it is more convenient than writing on paper. This helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important items. For example, I can quickly check the list on my phone while moving through the store, which saves time and makes shopping more efficient.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and some unclear phrases. For example, "make A to do list on my work" should be "make a to-do list for my work." Also, avoid vague phrases like "making things or doing things in a right manner." Try to be more specific and use linking words to improve coherence.

示例: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work because it helps me stay organized and complete important tasks efficiently. As a result, I can avoid mistakes and manage my time better.

建议: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and clearer sentence structures. For example, instead of "do it in a natural way," you could say "work without interruptions." Also, use linking words like "because" to connect ideas logically.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find checking their phone distracting while working. They prefer to work without interruptions and feel that looking at a list wastes their time.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. For example, "writing down on paper" should be "writing on paper," and avoid repeating "keep" twice. Also, try to use linking words like "because" and "however" to make your answer more coherent.

示例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient than writing on paper. Paper lists can get lost or damaged, but with a phone, I can easily check and keep my lists safe.

× I usually make a shopping list on my mobile phone because it is much more convenient than writing down on paper.

✓ I usually make a shopping list on my mobile phone because it is much more convenient than writing it down on paper.

The phrase 'writing down on paper' is incomplete and awkward. The verb 'write down' requires an object, so 'it' (referring to the list) should be included to clarify the action. Correct usage is 'writing it down on paper.'

× I can quickly check the list of on my phone as I move through the store, which saves me time and makes the whole process more efficient.

✓ I can quickly check the list on my phone as I move through the store, which saves me time and makes the whole process more efficient.

The phrase 'check the list of on my phone' contains an unnecessary preposition 'of'. The correct phrase is 'check the list on my phone.' Removing 'of' makes the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.

× Yes, I do make A to do list on my work.

✓ Yes, I do make a to-do list at my work.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' because it is a compound noun. Also, the preposition 'on' is incorrect here; 'at my work' is more appropriate to indicate location.

× This helps me to work in an efficient manner and avoid important tasks to do.

✓ This helps me to work in an efficient manner and avoid missing important tasks.

The phrase 'avoid important tasks to do' is unclear and incorrect. The intended meaning is likely to avoid forgetting or missing important tasks. Therefore, 'avoid missing important tasks' is a clearer and grammatically correct expression.

× This has helped me on making things or doing things in a right manner and avoiding errors.

✓ This has helped me make or do things in the right manner and avoid errors.

The phrase 'helped me on making things' is incorrect; the verb 'help' is followed directly by the base form of the verb without 'on'. Also, 'a right manner' should be 'the right manner' because it refers to a specific way. 'Avoiding errors' should be parallel with the previous verbs, so 'avoid errors' is better.

× As they are working, they don't want to get distracted checking on their list through phone.

✓ As they are working, they don't want to get distracted by checking their list through their phone.

The verb 'distracted' is usually followed by the preposition 'by' to indicate the cause of distraction. Also, 'checking on their list' should be 'checking their list' and 'through phone' should be 'through their phone' for clarity and correctness.

× They want to do it in a natural way and they don't want to keep wasting their time while performing some tasks.

✓ They want to do it in a natural way and they don't want to keep wasting their time while performing tasks.

The phrase 'performing some tasks' is not incorrect but 'performing tasks' is more natural and general in this context. The correction is minor and optional.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone as it is more convenient than writing down on paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone as it is more convenient than writing it down on paper.

Similar to a previous correction, 'writing down on paper' lacks an object. Adding 'it' clarifies that the list is being written down. This makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× The paper might get lost while you're working and you need to keep folding your paper or keep keep it on your pocket.

✓ The paper might get lost while you're working and you need to keep folding your paper or keep it in your pocket.

The phrase 'keep keep it' contains a repeated word 'keep' which is a typographical error. Also, the preposition 'on your pocket' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in your pocket.'

× But if there is phone you can just check it and you can just keep your things.

✓ But if there is a phone, you can just check it and you can just keep your things.

The phrase 'if there is phone' is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'phone.' The correct phrase is 'if there is a phone.' This is necessary because 'phone' is a countable singular noun here.