列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use complete sentences and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I often make a shopping list because I tend to forget items. Additionally, my mom reminds me to prepare one, so it helps me stay organized.

建议: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Focus on directly answering the question with clear and specific details. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

示例: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me remember my goals. Moreover, lists assist me in preparing for exams by organizing my study tasks.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but has grammar and vocabulary errors. Use correct forms and avoid repetition. Also, provide specific reasons with linking words for clarity.

示例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it unnecessary and a waste of time. Furthermore, they may feel bored by the process.

建议: Your answer is good but contains some awkward phrases and minor errors. Use more natural expressions and link your ideas clearly.

示例: In today's fast-paced world, I prefer making lists on my phone rather than on paper because paper can get damaged easily. Also, my phone can remind me by setting alarms.

× Yes, I often make list when I go to the shopping because I easily forget the things and my mom always scold me about this habit so I always prepare a list.

✓ Yes, I often make a list when I go shopping because I easily forget things and my mom always scolds me about this habit, so I always prepare a list.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular, so it requires the article 'a'. 'The shopping' is incorrect; 'shopping' as an activity does not need 'the'. 'The things' is too specific; 'things' without 'the' is more natural here. 'Scold' needs to be in third person singular form 'scolds' to agree with 'my mom'. Adding commas improves sentence clarity.

× Yes, I often make list when I go to the shopping because I easily forget the things and my mom always scold me about this habit so I always prepare a list.

✓ Yes, I often make a list when I go shopping because I easily forget things and my mom always scolds me about this habit, so I always prepare a list.

'My mom' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'scolds' not 'scold' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, I often make list when I go to the shopping because I easily forget the things and my mom always scold me about this habit so I always prepare a list.

✓ Yes, I often make a list when I go shopping because I easily forget things and my mom always scolds me about this habit, so I always prepare a list.

'Go to the shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping' without 'to the'. Also, 'about this habit' is correct preposition usage here.

× Yes, making a list helps you reminding your goals and moreover they help them to memorize or prepare your prepare you for exams.

✓ Yes, making a list helps you remember your goals and moreover helps you memorize or prepare for your exams.

'Helps you reminding' is incorrect; the verb 'help' should be followed by the base form 'remember'. 'They help them' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'helps you'. 'Prepare your prepare you' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'prepare for your exams'. Also, 'exams' is plural and correctly used here.

× Yes, making a list helps you reminding your goals and moreover they help them to memorize or prepare your prepare you for exams.

✓ Yes, making a list helps you remember your goals and moreover helps you memorize or prepare for your exams.

'They help them' is incorrect pronoun usage; the subject and object pronouns do not match the context. It should be 'helps you' to refer to the person making the list.

× Yes, making a list helps you reminding your goals and moreover they help them to memorize or prepare your prepare you for exams.

✓ Yes, making a list helps you remember your goals and moreover helps you memorize or prepare for your exams.

'Help' is followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'helps you reminding' should be 'helps you remember'.

× I think that some people do not like making list because they feel that making list is unnecessarily and wastage of time and moreover sometimes they feel bored by making Lee.

✓ I think that some people do not like making lists because they feel that making lists is unnecessary and a waste of time, and moreover sometimes they feel bored by making lists.

'List' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity. 'Unnecessarily' is an adverb; the adjective 'unnecessary' is correct here. 'Wastage' is a noun but 'a waste of time' is the correct phrase. 'Making Lee' is likely a typo and should be 'making lists'.

× I think that some people do not like making list because they feel that making list is unnecessarily and wastage of time and moreover sometimes they feel bored by making Lee.

✓ I think that some people do not like making lists because they feel that making lists is unnecessary and a waste of time, and moreover sometimes they feel bored by making lists.

'Unnecessarily' is an adverb but the sentence requires the adjective 'unnecessary' to describe 'making lists'. Also, 'wastage' is less common; 'a waste of time' is the correct expression.

× I think that some people do not like making list because they feel that making list is unnecessarily and wastage of time and moreover sometimes they feel bored by making Lee.

✓ I think that some people do not like making lists because they feel that making lists is unnecessary and a waste of time, and moreover sometimes they feel bored by making lists.

'Making list' should be 'making lists' to correctly refer to the activity in general. Consistency in plural form is important.

× Well, this fast-paced society is blessed with technology, so I prefer to make a list on the phone rather than on a paper because paper can be easily bitter or can be wet.

✓ Well, this fast-paced society is blessed with technology, so I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because paper can be easily torn or can get wet.

'On the phone' is better as 'on my phone' to specify possession. 'On a paper' is incorrect; 'on paper' is the correct phrase. 'Bitter' is incorrect here; likely intended 'torn'. Also, 'can be wet' is better as 'can get wet'.

× Well, this fast-paced society is blessed with technology, so I prefer to make a list on the phone rather than on a paper because paper can be easily bitter or can be wet.

✓ Well, this fast-paced society is blessed with technology, so I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because paper can be easily torn or can get wet.

'Bitter' is an adjective related to taste and is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'torn' to describe paper damage.

× So phones remind me easily by setting an alarm.

✓ So phones remind me easily by setting an alarm.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no preposition error detected.