列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言有些不自然，且存在语法错误，如“help me remind of it”应为“help me remember it”。建议简化表达，避免冗余，同时注意语法准确。

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I find it hard to remember everything I need. Writing it down helps me avoid forgetting important items.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误，如“this play as a reminder”应为“this plays as a reminder”，且表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的句子结构，并补充具体细节说明效果。

示例: Yes, I make a to-do list every morning to organize my tasks. It helps me stay focused and ensures I complete all my important work on time.

建议: 回答中重复使用“making lists”，显得冗余，且句子结构不够流畅。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，并丰富内容。

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it wastes time. They prefer to start tasks immediately instead of spending time planning.

建议: 回答较为自然，但“more neutral for me”表达不够准确。建议使用更贴切的词汇，并注意句子流畅性。

示例: I prefer making lists on paper because it feels more personal to me. However, if I don't have paper, I use my phone since it's convenient and easy to access.

× Before I go to grocery shop, I will write down everything I want to purchase to help me remind of it.

✓ Before I go to the grocery shop, I will write down everything I want to purchase to help me remember it.

这里 'help me remind of it' 用法错误，应该用动词 'remember' 来表达记住的意思，而不是 'remind'。此外，'grocery shop' 前应加定冠词 'the'。

× Before I go to grocery shop, I will write down everything I want to purchase to help me remind of it.

✓ Before I go to the grocery shop, I will write down everything I want to purchase to help me remember it.

短语 'remind of' 用法不当，正确表达应为 'help me remember it'，表示帮助记住。

× Yes, this play as a reminder for me every time.

✓ Yes, this plays as a reminder for me every time.

句子缺少动词的第三人称单数形式，'play' 应改为 'plays'，以符合主谓一致。

× I will plan the whole day at morning and I think it will help me remind my compulsory work very well.

✓ I will plan the whole day in the morning and I think it will help me remember my compulsory work very well.

'at morning' 应改为 'in the morning'，这是固定搭配；'help me remind' 用法错误，应为 'help me remember'。

× I will plan the whole day at morning and I think it will help me remind my compulsory work very well.

✓ I will plan the whole day in the morning and I think it will help me remember my compulsory work very well.

'help me remind' 用法错误，应该用 'help me remember'，因为 'remind' 通常是提醒别人，而这里是自己记住。

× They prefer doing something rather than make a list and then doing that because they think it's a type of wasting time.

✓ They prefer doing something rather than making a list and then doing that because they think it's a type of wasting time.

'prefer' 后面两个动作应保持形式一致，均用动名词形式，因此 'make' 应改为 'making'。

× I prefer to make a list on paper because it's more neutral for me, but if I don't have paper and a pen I will choose make a list on my phone because it's easy to carry and find.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because it's more natural for me, but if I don't have paper and a pen I will choose to make a list on my phone because it's easy to carry and find.

'neutral' 用词不当，应为 'natural' 表示更自然；'choose make' 缺少不定式 'to'，应为 'choose to make'。