列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了做购物清单的原因，但语言不够自然，存在语法错误和重复表达。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更地道的表达方式。

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy and makes shopping more efficient.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够清晰。建议使用连贯的句子，明确说明做工作清单的步骤和好处。

示例: Yes, I make a to-do list before starting work. It helps me prioritize tasks and complete them efficiently, which makes me feel more organized.

建议: 回答中有语法错误，词汇使用不准确（如'border'应为'bored'），表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇并简洁表达原因。

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it boring and troublesome. They prefer to remember things mentally instead.

建议: 回答表达了偏好和理由，但句子结构较复杂且有些重复。建议简化句子，使用更自然的表达方式。

示例: I prefer making lists on paper because it's easier to remember things that way. Writing them down helps me avoid forgetting important tasks.

× When I prepare to buy, I will make a list because it can makes me buy things easily.

✓ When I prepare to buy, I will make a list because it can make me buy things easily.

这里的情态动词'can'后面应该接动词原形'make'，而不是第三人称单数形式'makes'。情态动词后动词不变形。

× When I would start my work I I write a list so I know something I can do 1st and 2nd and the last.

✓ When I start my work, I write a list so I know what I can do first, second, and last.

'would'在这里不合适，表示一般现在时应使用'start'。另外，'1st and 2nd and the last'应改为'first, second, and last'，更符合英语表达习惯。

× It will works very easily and makes makes me comfortable.

✓ It will work very easily and makes me comfortable.

助动词'will'后动词应为原形，不能加-s。'makes makes'重复，应去掉一个。

× Because maybe some people don't like make a list because it's very border, very, very troublesome.

✓ Because maybe some people don't like making a list because it's very boring, very, very troublesome.

'like'后应接动名词'making'，而不是动词原形'make'。另外，'border'应为'boring'，表示无聊。

× Maybe they can make a list in their mind.

✓ Maybe they can make a list in their minds.

'mind'应使用复数形式'minds'，表示每个人的心里。

× I prefer to make a list on paper because in China people said a good thing.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because in China people say a good thing.

时态错误，'said'应为一般现在时'say'，因为这里表达的是普遍真理。

× A good list on paper is better than your mind because your mind sometimes will forget something, but if you write it on the paper, you will never forget.

✓ A good list on paper is better than your mind because your mind sometimes forgets something, but if you write it on paper, you will never forget.

'your mind sometimes will forget'中，'will'可省略，且主谓一致，'mind'为第三人称单数，动词应加-s。'on the paper'中'the'不必要，改为'on paper'更自然。