列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "go to the shopping"; instead say "go shopping." Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember items that I might otherwise forget.

建议: Your answer is clear but has grammatical errors and redundancy. Use linking words to improve coherence and correct phrases like "avoid the forgotten the essential things" to "avoid forgetting essential tasks."

示例: Yes, I definitely make a list for my daily work because it helps me remember important tasks and avoid forgetting anything essential.

建议: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Use simpler, clearer sentences and correct verb tenses. Also, use linking words to explain your opinion logically.

示例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they find it burdensome to prepare one before shopping or working.

建议: Your answer is relevant but has repetition and awkward phrasing. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, correct phrases like "a waste more waste" to "a waste of resources."

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient to carry it when shopping or working. Moreover, using paper lists wastes resources and energy.

× I often make a list when I go to the shopping because this list helps me to remember the things which I otherwise forgot.

✓ I often make a list when I go shopping because this list helps me to remember the things which I otherwise forgot.

The phrase 'go to the shopping' is incorrect because 'shopping' is an uncountable noun here and does not require the definite article 'the'. The correct phrase is 'go shopping'.

× I do make a list for my daily work. It helps me to remember the things and avoid the forgotten the essential things to work.

✓ I do make a list for my daily work. It helps me to remember things and avoid forgetting the essential things for work.

The phrase 'avoid the forgotten the essential things to work' is incorrect. 'Avoid' should be followed by a gerund ('forgetting'), and 'the essential things to work' should be 'the essential things for work'. Also, 'the things' is better as 'things' without 'the' here because it refers to things in general.

× some people actually don't like making list because it was like think a burden which they have to made prior to the doing some shopping or to do some work.

✓ some people actually don't like making lists because it feels like a burden which they have to make prior to doing some shopping or doing some work.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making lists. Also, 'it was like think a burden' is incorrect; it should be 'it feels like a burden'. 'have to made' should be 'have to make'. 'prior to the doing some shopping' should be 'prior to doing some shopping'.

× I prefer making a list on my on my cell phone because it is very convenient for me to take the the smartphone to the shopping centers and to the work.

✓ I prefer making a list on my cell phone because it is very convenient for me to take the smartphone to shopping centers and to work.

The phrase 'take the the smartphone to the shopping centers and to the work' is incorrect. 'the the' is a typo. 'shopping centers' does not need 'the' before it when speaking generally. Also, 'to the work' should be 'to work' because 'work' here is uncountable and does not require 'the'.

× And instead of making a list on the papers, I believe that it would be a a waste more waste of resources and energy.

✓ And instead of making a list on paper, I believe that it would be more wasteful of resources and energy.

The phrase 'a a waste more waste' is incorrect and redundant. The correct phrase is 'more wasteful'. Also, 'on the papers' should be 'on paper' because 'paper' is uncountable here and does not require 'the'.