列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid repeating the same idea. For example, say "I make a list when I shop to avoid impulsive buying and focus on necessary items."

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me avoid buying things impulsively and ensures I only purchase what I really need.

建议: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and some unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more concise. For example, "I make daily work lists because I often feel overwhelmed. This helps me set and accomplish goals, making my work easier."

示例: Yes, I usually list my daily tasks because I often feel overwhelmed. By setting clear goals, I can complete my work more efficiently.

建议: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion more clearly and use linking words. For example, "Some people dislike making lists because they think it's a waste of time and doubt their ability to follow plans."

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they believe it's unnecessary and doubt they can stick to their plans daily.

建议: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar mistakes. Try to be more concise and clear. For example, "I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me and can easily track my progress."

示例: I prefer using my phone to make lists since I always carry it and can check my tasks anytime to stay organized.

× I think by listing out the necessities I need to buy, I can control myself not to over buying or impulsive buying so that making a lease can keep me in the mind that what things are really necessary to buy and what are just not really.

✓ I think by listing out the necessities I need to buy, I can control myself not to overbuy or buy impulsively so that making a list can keep me in mind what things are really necessary to buy and what are not.

The verbs 'over buying' and 'impulsive buying' are incorrectly used as gerunds here; the correct forms are 'overbuy' (verb) and 'buy impulsively' (verb + adverb). Also, 'making a lease' is a typo and should be 'making a list'. The phrase 'keep me in the mind' is incorrect; it should be 'keep me in mind' or better 'keep in my mind'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I have a habit of listing out my daily work because I always feel overwhelmed by a tonnes of work and therefore I would like to set goals for myself so that I can accomplish my goals everyday so that my work can be more easier and more available for me to do it.

✓ I have a habit of listing out my daily work because I always feel overwhelmed by a ton of work and therefore I would like to set goals for myself so that I can accomplish my goals every day so that my work can be easier and more manageable for me to do.

The phrase 'a tonnes of work' is incorrect because 'tonnes' is plural and cannot be used with 'a'. The correct singular form is 'a ton of work'. Also, 'everyday' is an adjective meaning 'common' but here the adverb 'every day' is needed. 'More easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already comparative; 'more' is unnecessary. 'More available' is awkward; 'more manageable' or 'easier' fits better.

× I think one reason may be because they think making a list is wasting the time because planning the work they have to do is very unnecessary and that not really make sense that they can.

✓ I think one reason may be that they think making a list is a waste of time because planning the work they have to do is very unnecessary and that it doesn't really make sense to them.

The phrase 'may be because' is better expressed as 'may be that'. 'Wasting the time' should be 'a waste of time'. 'That not really make sense that they can' is ungrammatical; it should be 'that it doesn't really make sense to them'. These corrections clarify meaning and correct modal and verb usage.

× They don't believe in themselves that they can follow their goals to accomplish their task every day.

✓ They don't believe in themselves that they can follow their goals to accomplish their tasks every day.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to agree with 'goals' and the general meaning of multiple tasks. This is a singular and plural agreement issue related to pronouns and nouns.

× I prefer marking my work on my phone because I can keep on track with my progress at any time because I always bring my out and maybe so that I can always witness and notify what I haven't done on my phone by watching my phone.

✓ I prefer marking my work on my phone because I can keep track of my progress at any time since I always bring it with me, so I can always see and be reminded of what I haven't done by checking my phone.

The phrase 'keep on track with' should be 'keep track of'. 'I always bring my out' is incorrect; it should be 'I always bring it with me'. 'Witness and notify' are not appropriate verbs here; 'see' and 'be reminded' fit better. 'By watching my phone' is awkward; 'by checking my phone' is clearer. These corrections fix preposition and word choice errors.