列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言有些重复且不够简洁。建议减少重复表达，使用更自然的句式，并且增加连接词使句子更流畅。

示例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop. As a result, I often end up buying unnecessary items, which I later regret. Therefore, making a list would help me focus on what I really need.

建议: 回答内容较完整，但语法和表达有些错误。建议注意时态和句子结构，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

示例: Definitely, I make a list when I work, and it is very helpful. I usually use Google Calendar to schedule my tasks hour by hour, which helps reduce my stress when I complete everything on time.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，避免拼写错误，并且清晰表达观点。

示例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and troublesome. Others may feel that making lists limits their spontaneity and freedom.

建议: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构较复杂且有些重复。建议简化句子，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. In contrast, paper lists can be easily lost or hard to find when needed, so using my phone is more convenient.

× I usually just go in the shop to buy what I need to buy, but usually it ends up with so many unnecessary things in my shopping cart and I regret not having a list to remind what I only need to buy.

✓ I usually just go into the shop to buy what I need, but it usually ends up with so many unnecessary things in my shopping cart and I regret not having a list to remind me what I only need to buy.

这里“go in the shop”应改为“go into the shop”，因为表示进入某个地方时，介词应使用“into”。另外，“remind what I only need to buy”缺少宾语，应为“remind me what I only need to buy”。

× So I usually use Google Calendar and to fill up every hour with the task I need to tackle and this relief a lot of stress from me if I can complete all the tasks required.

✓ So I usually use Google Calendar to fill up every hour with the tasks I need to tackle, and this relieves a lot of stress from me if I can complete all the tasks required.

“and to fill up”中的“to”应去掉，保持句子结构一致。动词“relief”应为“relieves”，因为主语是“this”，需要第三人称单数形式。

× 1 is that a lot of people may find making a list really much of A hassle, and another reason is that some people may find making a wrist lesson a lot of fun of doing the unknowing.

✓ One is that a lot of people may find making a list really much of a hassle, and another reason is that some people may find making a list a lot of fun instead of doing the unknown.

数字“1”应写为“One”，且“much of A hassle”应为“much of a hassle”。“wrist lesson”应为“list”，且“a lot of fun of doing the unknowing”表达不清，应改为“a lot of fun instead of doing the unknown”。

× I always make a list on my phone because I will carry my phone everywhere with me.

✓ I always make a list on my phone because I carry my phone everywhere with me.

“will carry”表示将来时，但这里描述习惯动作，应使用一般现在时“carry”。

× But sometimes if I make a list on paper and I may find it difficult to locate when I need it, but I always have my phone on my side and that's really handy.

✓ But sometimes if I make a list on paper, I may find it difficult to locate when I need it, but I always have my phone by my side and that's really handy.

“on my side”应改为“by my side”，表示“在我身边”。