列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在较多的语气词“uh”，影响流畅性。建议减少填充词，回答时更自然简洁，直接表达观点，并用具体细节支持观点。

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me organize what I need and saves time. For example, I can avoid forgetting important items and shop more efficiently.

建议: 回答结构不够清晰，句子较长且重复。建议先明确回答问题，再用连词连接具体理由，避免语法错误。

示例: Yes, I make lists for my study and travel. They help me see the overall plan clearly, so I can complete tasks more directly and efficiently.

建议: 回答中语气词过多，表达不够连贯，且用词不准确。建议简化句子，使用恰当词汇，逻辑清晰地表达观点。

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it wastes time and prefer to do things immediately without planning.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够流畅。建议注意时态一致，避免重复，句子简洁明了。

示例: I used to make lists on paper when I was in junior school, but now I prefer using my phone because it's more convenient and I always have it with me.

× I like to making lists on paper when I was in Junior School, but now I like to make it on computer or phone because we always use electronic electronic smartphones in our daily life and it may be more convenient because we when we open our phone when we turn on.

✓ I liked making lists on paper when I was in Junior School, but now I like to make them on a computer or phone because we always use electronic smartphones in our daily life and it may be more convenient when we turn on our phones.

动词后面接动名词时，不能用不定式to + 动名词形式。这里应使用liked making而不是like to making。此外，句中存在时态错误，描述过去的习惯应使用过去时liked。还需注意复数形式和冠词的使用。

× I like to making lists on paper when I was in Junior School, but now I like to make it on computer or phone because we always use electronic electronic smartphones in our daily life and it may be more convenient because we when we open our phone when we turn on.

✓ I liked making lists on paper when I was in Junior School, but now I like to make them on a computer or phone because we always use electronic smartphones in our daily life and it may be more convenient when we turn on our phones.

描述过去的习惯动作时，应使用过去时态liked，而不是现在时like。

× I like to making lists on paper when I was in Junior School, but now I like to make it on computer or phone because we always use electronic electronic smartphones in our daily life and it may be more convenient because we when we open our phone when we turn on.

✓ I liked making lists on paper when I was in Junior School, but now I like to make them on a computer or phone because we always use electronic smartphones in our daily life and it may be more convenient when we turn on our phones.

列表是复数形式，指多个列表，应使用them而不是it。computer前应加冠词a，phones应为复数形式。

× I like to making lists on paper when I was in Junior School, but now I like to make it on computer or phone because we always use electronic electronic smartphones in our daily life and it may be more convenient because we when we open our phone when we turn on.

✓ I liked making lists on paper when I was in Junior School, but now I like to make them on a computer or phone because we always use electronic smartphones in our daily life and it may be more convenient when we turn on our phones.

介词on后面应接具体设备，如on a computer或on a phone，而不是on computer或phone。

× Maybe they think that making lists may, uh, distribute, uh, their interest in doing things, uh, because they won't, uh, when they want to do something and they go straightly to do it, uh, not making the list, it may be the waste of time and they may want to do the things, uh, more immediately.

✓ Maybe they think that making lists may, uh, distract their interest in doing things, uh, because they won't, uh, when they want to do something, go straight to do it. Uh, not making the list may be a waste of time and they may want to do things more immediately.

副词straightly用法错误，正确用法是go straight to do something。副词应放在动词前或后，且straightly不是常用副词，应使用straight。

× Yes. I also make the list for my study and travel and when I'm making the list of plans, it may be more efficient and it may let us know the overview of the whole things and it can be do the things more directly.

✓ Yes. I also make lists for my study and travel, and when I'm making a list of plans, it may be more efficient and it may let us know the overview of the whole thing and it can help us do things more directly.

代词使用不当，the list应为lists，the whole things应为the whole thing，it can be do the things应改为it can help us do things。

× Yes. I also make the list for my study and travel and when I'm making the list of plans, it may be more efficient and it may let us know the overview of the whole things and it can be do the things more directly.

✓ Yes. I also make lists for my study and travel, and when I'm making a list of plans, it may be more efficient and it may let us know the overview of the whole thing and it can help us do things more directly.

句中it can be do the things结构错误，动词不应用被动形式，应改为主动结构help us do things。

× I like to making lists on paper when I was in Junior School, but now I like to make it on computer or phone because we always use electronic electronic smartphones in our daily life and it may be more convenient because we when we open our phone when we turn on.

✓ I liked making lists on paper when I was in Junior School, but now I like to make them on a computer or phone because we always use electronic smartphones in our daily life and it may be more convenient when we turn on our phones.

句中because we when we open our phone when we turn on结构重复且不通顺，应简化为when we turn on our phones。