列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid redundancy. Use clearer sentence structures and correct grammar, such as 'when I go shopping for groceries, I make a list, but when I buy clothes, I don't because it depends on my preferences.' Also, limit your answer to about 3-4 sentences for clarity and effectiveness.

示例: I usually make a list when I go grocery shopping to ensure I don't forget anything. However, when I shop for clothes, I don't make a list because I prefer to choose items spontaneously based on my taste.

建议: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Avoid repetition and explain your ideas more clearly. For example, say 'I usually keep a to-do list in my mind rather than writing it down because I find that physical lists can be overwhelming.' Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

示例: I usually keep a to-do list in my mind because it helps me stay focused. If I write a list, I sometimes feel pressured and less motivated to finish all tasks.

建议: Work on grammar and sentence structure. Avoid informal contractions like 'cause' and incomplete sentences. Provide a clearer opinion with supporting reasons. For example, 'Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to rely on their memory instead.'

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they believe it wastes time. They prefer to remember tasks mentally, which works well for them.

建议: Try to avoid informal language like 'would love to' and 'cause'. Use more formal linking words and clearer sentence structures. For example, 'I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and accessible, whereas paper lists can be easily lost.'

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I can access them anytime. In contrast, paper lists can be misplaced easily.

× Sometimes I make a list when I shop, like when I'm going to shopping for a grocery I make a list, but whenever I want to go to buy some clothes for myself then I don't bother to make a list 'cause then it all just all depends on me, what I like and what.

✓ Sometimes I make a list when I shop, like when I'm going shopping for groceries I make a list, but whenever I want to go to buy some clothes for myself then I don't bother to make a list 'cause then it all just all depends on me, what I like and what.

The phrase 'going to shopping' is incorrect because 'go' is followed by the gerund form without 'to'. The correct form is 'going shopping'. Also, 'a grocery' is incorrect; 'groceries' is the correct plural noun for food items bought at a store.

× Sometimes I make a list when I shop, like when I'm going to shopping for a grocery I make a list, but whenever I want to go to buy some clothes for myself then I don't bother to make a list 'cause then it all just all depends on me, what I like and what.

✓ Sometimes I make a list when I shop, like when I'm going shopping for groceries I make a list, but whenever I want to go to buy some clothes for myself then I don't bother to make a list 'cause then it all just all depends on me, what I like and what.

The phrase 'going to shopping for a grocery' misuses the preposition 'to'. The correct expression is 'going shopping for groceries' without 'to' before 'shopping' and using the plural 'groceries'.

× I don't make any physical or digital list for my work 'cause it just I just have to make A to do list in my mind according to which I can work upon.

✓ I don't make any physical or digital list for my work 'cause I just have to make a to-do list in my mind according to which I can work.

The phrase 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list' with lowercase 'a' and hyphens in 'to-do'. Also, 'work upon' is awkward; 'work' alone is sufficient. The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' as it is in the middle of the sentence.

× I don't make any physical or digital list for my work 'cause it just I just have to make A to do list in my mind according to which I can work upon.

✓ I don't make any physical or digital list for my work 'cause I just have to make a to-do list in my mind according to which I can work.

The preposition 'upon' after 'work' is unnecessary and awkward here. The verb 'work' does not require a preposition in this context.

× 'Cause some people find it a waste of a time to making list as they can do all that thing by just their muscle memory.

✓ 'Cause some people find it a waste of time to make lists as they can do all that by just their muscle memory.

The phrase 'to making list' is incorrect because after 'to' (as a preposition here), the base form of the verb should be used: 'to make'. Also, 'a waste of a time' should be 'a waste of time' and 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the context.

× 'Cause some people find it a waste of a time to making list as they can do all that thing by just their muscle memory.

✓ 'Cause some people find it a waste of time to make lists as they can do all that by just their muscle memory.

'A waste of a time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'a waste of time'. Also, 'all that thing' is awkward; 'all that' suffices. 'List' should be plural 'lists' to agree with 'some people'.

× So I think it would be more better if people start memorizing things instead of making lists.

✓ So I think it would be better if people start memorizing things instead of making lists.

'More better' is incorrect because 'better' is already a comparative adjective. Using 'more' with 'better' is redundant. The correct form is simply 'better'.

× Nowadays I would love to make a list on my phone 'cause it's more convenient and I can easily access it whenever I want to, whereas I can lose the paper at any time.

✓ Nowadays I would love to make a list on my phone 'cause it's more convenient and I can easily access it whenever I want to, whereas I can lose the paper at any time.

No correction needed for prepositions in this sentence.

× And yeah, so that's why I prefer to keep list on my notes in my phone.

✓ And yeah, so that's why I prefer to keep the list in my notes on my phone.

The phrase 'keep list on my notes in my phone' misuses prepositions. The correct prepositions are 'keep the list in my notes on my phone' because 'notes' is an app or folder inside the phone, so 'in' is appropriate for 'notes' and 'on' for 'phone'.