列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors, and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need. Sometimes, I try to memorize the items, but I find making a list much easier and more reliable.

建议: Your answer is a bit unclear and repetitive. Start with a direct response, then explain with specific details using linking words like 'because' or 'however'. Also, correct grammar and sentence structure to improve clarity.

示例: I don't always make a list for my work because my schedule is very busy. However, when I do plan my day, it helps me be more efficient and complete tasks on time.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Use clear linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas logically. Provide specific reasons and avoid incomplete sentences. Keep your answer concise and focused.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer a flexible routine. Also, in today's fast-paced world, they may feel that making lists takes too much time.

建议: Your answer is generally clear but can be more concise and natural. Start with a direct statement, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and always accessible. Since technology is everywhere, using my phone is easier than paper, and I don't have to worry about forgetting my list.

× Sometimes yes I have a list then uh memorizing.

✓ Sometimes yes I have a list then uh memorize.

The verb 'memorizing' is incorrectly used here. After 'then', the base form 'memorize' should be used to indicate the action. Using the '-ing' form without an auxiliary verb is incorrect in this context.

× It's a very easy for me but umm it's actually a good experience for me to memorizing as well when I don't bring a list as well.

✓ It's very easy for me but umm it's actually a good experience for me to memorize as well when I don't bring a list.

The phrase 'a very easy' is incorrect; 'easy' is an adjective and does not need 'a' before it. Also, 'to memorizing' should be 'to memorize' because after 'to' the base form of the verb is used.

× So sometimes it work.

✓ So sometimes it works.

The subject 'it' is singular, so the verb should be in third person singular form 'works' to agree with the subject.

× I would say it's really benefits and sometimes I don't have a plan or at least to make my day very sufficient and very efficient.

✓ I would say it really benefits and sometimes I don't have a plan or at least to make my day very sufficient and very efficient.

The phrase 'it's really benefits' is incorrect because 'benefits' is a verb here, so 'it really benefits' is correct. Also, 'sufficient' is not commonly used to describe a day; 'productive' or 'effective' would be better, but since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes, this is left as is.

× From what I know, that's because of the fixed routine that it gives me the making list.

✓ From what I know, that's because of the fixed routine that making a list gives me.

The sentence structure is awkward and the subject-verb relationship is unclear. Reordering the sentence clarifies the subject and verb agreement.

× So sometimes I think that the people likes to do have a flexible routine in their life and say since they have very busy routine in today's fast moving world.

✓ So sometimes I think that people like to have a flexible routine in their life since they have a very busy routine in today's fast moving world.

'People' is plural, so the verb should be 'like' not 'likes'. Also, 'do have' is redundant here; 'have' alone is sufficient.

× You know, it's very easy to make a list from my phone then right into in today's world, we know all the things are done by the technology.

✓ You know, it's very easy to make a list on my phone because in today's world, we know all things are done by technology.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect; 'on my phone' is the correct phrase. Also, 'right into in' is incorrect and unnecessary. 'By the technology' should be 'by technology' without 'the'.

× So since we have this technology, why we use the paper.

✓ So since we have this technology, why do we use paper?

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'do' for the question form. Also, 'the paper' is incorrect here; 'paper' without 'the' is more appropriate.

× So I prefer making this in my phone since it since it is very accessible in everywhere and it is very easy for me and we don't have to memorize.

✓ So I prefer making this on my phone since it is very accessible everywhere and it is very easy for me and we don't have to memorize.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect; 'on my phone' is correct. Also, 'accessible in everywhere' is incorrect; it should be 'accessible everywhere' without 'in'.