列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant but a bit unclear and slightly repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid unnecessary details like 'AG type person' which may confuse the listener. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and clarify your points.

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me manage my budget and remember what I need to buy. This way, I can avoid forgetting important items and control my spending effectively.

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to make your ideas flow logically. Avoid grammatical errors and incomplete sentences.

示例: Yes, I always make a list for my work, especially when studying. It helps me follow instructions easily and organise my tasks throughout the day. Moreover, it allows me to manage my time more efficiently.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but could be more specific and natural. Avoid vague phrases like 'buy the list' which is unclear. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide clearer reasons.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and easy to forget. Also, maintaining the habit can be difficult if they are not organised or motivated enough.

建议: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Make sure to complete your sentences and clarify your points. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid grammatical mistakes. Specify your preference clearly.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient to edit and carry around. Additionally, it is more eco-friendly than using paper lists.

× I think that it helps me to calculate the total expenditure in the whole day and remind me what I have to do in the whole day such as the To Do List.

✓ I think that it helps me to calculate the total expenditure in the whole day and reminds me what I have to do in the whole day such as the To Do List.

The verb 'remind' should be in the third person singular form 'reminds' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue involving verb form, which falls under the 'Verb + -ing form' category as the verb form is incorrect here.

× I always make a list for my work such as studying because I think it is simple for me to follow the instruction and it helps me to know what I have should what should I do in the whole day and I think it helps me to separate the time and.

✓ I always make a list for my work, such as studying, because I think it is simple for me to follow the instructions. It helps me to know what I should do in the whole day, and I think it helps me to manage my time.

The original sentence is confusing and contains grammatical errors such as 'what I have should what should I do' which is incorrect. The sentence structure is faulty and needs to be broken into clearer sentences with correct word order and verb forms. This is a sentence structure error.

× Because it is complicated to make, at least I think you need to buy the list and write it in the morning, and sometimes the people might forget to do it.

✓ Because it is complicated to make, at least I think you need to buy the list and write it down in the morning, and sometimes people might forget to do it.

The phrase 'write it' is incomplete; the correct phrase is 'write it down' to indicate recording something. Also, 'the people' is better as 'people' in this context. The error involves incorrect use of prepositions and articles.

× I prefer making a list on my because it is convenient for me to make a note and take when I finish a go and I also think that it is eco friendly instead of using the paper.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because it is convenient for me to make a note and take it when I finish a go, and I also think that it is eco-friendly instead of using paper.

The pronoun 'my' is incomplete without a noun; it should be 'my phone'. Also, 'take' needs an object 'it' to be correct. 'Eco friendly' should be hyphenated as 'eco-friendly'. The phrase 'using the paper' should be 'using paper' without the article. These are incorrect pronoun and article uses.