列表— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Yes I do. Every time I go to the shop I refer to my list to purchase things.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Yes, every morning before I start my work I make A to do list which I go back during my work to check if I have completed all my work. And it also helps me to remember things that I tend to forget sometimes.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
People who are not very organised does not make any list, even if they are shopping or even if they are working. They just tend to go with the flow and explore whatever comes to their mind.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
It depends. When I'm going shopping I prefer a list on my phone rather than on the paper because the paper might get lost on the way and and it is very easy to go back and check on the list on the phone and you can actually tick or cross out the things that you bought.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分数: 75.0建议: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and detailed. Try to avoid repeating words like 'shop' and 'list' too closely and add a reason or benefit to enrich your response. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.
示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time. For instance, last week I bought all the ingredients for a recipe without forgetting anything.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分数: 80.0建议: Your answer is informative but could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating 'work' and use linking words like 'so' or 'which' to connect ideas smoothly. Also, correct minor grammar issues such as 'A to do list' to 'a to-do list'.
示例: Yes, I make a to-do list every morning before starting work, which I refer to throughout the day. This helps me stay organised and ensures I don't forget any important tasks.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分数: 70.0建议: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and could be more natural. Use correct subject-verb agreement ('do not' instead of 'does not') and try to provide more specific reasons or examples. Also, use linking words like 'because' to explain.
示例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and go with the flow, which allows them to explore ideas as they come to mind rather than following a strict plan.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分数: 85.0建议: Your answer is detailed and mostly natural, but avoid repeating words like 'on the' and 'and'. Use linking words like 'because' effectively and try to make sentences more concise for better flow.
示例: It depends, but when I go shopping, I prefer using my phone to make a list because it's less likely to get lost, and I can easily tick off items as I buy them, which keeps me organised.
语法
× People who are not very organised does not make any list, even if they are shopping or even if they are working.
✓ People who are not very organised do not make any list, even if they are shopping or even if they are working.
The subject 'People' is plural, so the verb should be 'do' instead of 'does' to agree in number. Also, 'does not make' should be 'do not make' to match the plural subject. This is a subject-verb agreement error.
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