列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如时态使用不当和句子结构不完整。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复表达，并使用更自然的表达方式。

示例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I already know what I need. Besides, online shopping is very popular now, so I often buy things online instead of going to the store.

建议: 回答缺乏逻辑和连贯性，表达不清晰且重复。建议明确表达观点，使用连接词使句子更流畅，并避免重复。

示例: No, I don't make lists for my work because I find my tasks are quite complex, and making lists might complicate things further.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且内容不具体。建议使用更准确的词汇，清晰表达原因，并举例说明。

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and believe it doesn't really help them change their habits.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅的问题。建议简化句子结构，注意语法正确性，并使用连贯的表达。

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so I can easily check my tasks anytime instead of using paper.

× I think when I go to the shop I know what I'm going to buy so I didn't make a list.

✓ I think when I go to the shop I know what I'm going to buy so I don't make a list.

这里的时间是现在时态，表示习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时，而不是过去时。

× Also now online shopping is very popular so I usually use online shopping instead of go to shop.

✓ Also now online shopping is very popular so I usually use online shopping instead of going to the shop.

动词后面接介词短语时，动词应使用动名词形式，且缺少定冠词'the'。

× I didn't make a list for my work.

✓ I don't make a list for my work.

这里描述的是习惯性行为，应使用一般现在时而非过去时。

× I think it's really comprehensive, so and it will umm, make your work more complex.

✓ I think it's really comprehensive, so it will umm, make your work more complex.

'so and'搭配不正确，应去掉'and'。

× Because it's an comprehensive and complex job.

✓ Because it's a comprehensive and complex job.

'comprehensive'以辅音音素开头，冠词应为'a'而非'an'。

× Making less can't change our actions too, so people don't like doing it.

✓ Making lists can't change our actions too, so people don't like doing it.

'less'用法错误，应为复数名词'lists'。

× I think I prefer to make a list on my phone.

✓ I think I prefer to make a list on my phone.

此句无语法错误，保持原句。

× Umm my phone is on my close to me everyday so when I if I can make a list I will check my phone to see what I'm going to do instead of write it on a paper.

✓ Umm my phone is close to me every day, so if I can make a list I will check my phone to see what I'm going to do instead of writing it on paper.

'on my close to me'表达错误，应为'close to me'；'everyday'应为副词短语'every day'；'instead of write'应为' instead of writing'；'a paper'应为'paper'。