列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. For example, use present tense consistently and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list on my mobile phone's Notes app because I often forget items. This helps me remember everything I need to buy.

建议: Your answer is clear but repetitive and slightly awkward. Try to avoid repeating words and improve coherence by using linking words. Also, be more specific about how the list helps you.

示例: Yes, I usually create a To-Do List for my work, which helps me organize tasks efficiently. As a result, I rarely forget important duties.

建议: Your answer has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct tense and sentence structure. Also, provide more specific reasons and use linking words to contrast your opinion.

示例: I think some people dislike making lists because they believe it wastes time. However, I find it very convenient since it helps me stay organized.

建议: Your answer is repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly.

示例: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because it's convenient and there's no risk of losing them. This method makes it easier to remember everything I need.

× Yes, when I was going for shopping, I used to make list on my mobile phone in the Notes app because sometimes I forget something to buy.

✓ Yes, when I was going shopping, I used to make a list on my mobile phone in the Notes app because sometimes I forgot something to buy.

The phrase 'going for shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'going shopping'. Also, 'make list' needs an article 'a' before 'list'. The verb 'forget' should be in past tense 'forgot' to match the past context of the sentence.

× Yes, when I was going for shopping, I used to make list on my mobile phone in the Notes app because sometimes I forget something to buy.

✓ Yes, when I was going shopping, I used to make a list on my mobile phone in the Notes app because sometimes I forgot something to buy.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× So that's why I can make the list so that I can remember all the things that I want.

✓ So that's why I made the list so that I could remember all the things that I wanted.

The sentence refers to past habits, so the verbs should be in past tense to maintain consistency.

× Yes, usually I make a list for my work.

✓ Yes, usually I make a list for my work.

This sentence is correct; no article errors found.

× We can say that it is my To Do List so that I can remember all the work.

✓ We can say that it is my To-Do List so that I can remember all the work.

'To Do List' should be hyphenated as 'To-Do List' as it is a compound noun.

× It works very clearly and I remember all the things with the with the help of that list.

✓ It works very well and I remember all the things with the help of that list.

The phrase 'works very clearly' is incorrect; 'works very well' is the correct collocation. Also, 'with the with the' is a repetition error; it should be 'with the help of that list'.

× I think that some people did not like to make this because they found that it is very waste of time.

✓ I think that some people do not like to make this because they find that it is a waste of time.

The sentence is about a general truth, so present tense 'do not like' and 'find' should be used instead of past tense. Also, 'very waste of time' is incorrect; it should be 'a waste of time'.

× I think that some people did not like to make this because they found that it is very waste of time.

✓ I think that some people do not like to make this because they find that it is a waste of time.

The phrase 'very waste of time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'a waste of time' with the indefinite article 'a'.

× But I don't think so because I found very convenient to make the list.

✓ But I don't think so because I find it very convenient to make the list.

The sentence expresses a current opinion, so present tense 'find' should be used instead of past tense 'found'. Also, 'found very convenient' lacks the object 'it'.

× Mostly I prefer to make list on my mobile phone because it is very convenient or not any risk of risk of losing the list.

✓ Mostly I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because it is very convenient and there is no risk of losing the list.

'Make list' needs the article 'a'. The phrase 'or not any risk of risk of losing the list' is incorrect; it should be 'and there is no risk of losing the list'.

× Mostly I prefer to make list on my mobile phone because it is very convenient or not any risk of risk of losing the list.

✓ Mostly I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because it is very convenient and there is no risk of losing the list.

The conjunction 'or' is incorrectly used here; 'and' is appropriate to connect the two positive statements.

× So that's why I make the list mostly in my mobile phone.

✓ So that's why I mostly make the list on my mobile phone.

The phrase 'in my mobile phone' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on'. Also, the adverb 'mostly' is better placed before the verb for natural word order.

× So that's why I make the list mostly in my mobile phone.

✓ So that's why I mostly make the list on my mobile phone.

The correct preposition to use with 'mobile phone' in this context is 'on', not 'in'.

× It is very convenient and easy way to remember all the things.

✓ It is a very convenient and easy way to remember all the things.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'very convenient and easy way'.