列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp các chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember what I need to buy. For example, last week I wrote down all the groceries I needed, which saved me time and prevented me from forgetting anything.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu cấu trúc rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích rõ hơn với các chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I make a list for my work every day because I have many tasks to complete. It helps me stay organized and ensures I finish the most important jobs on time.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn rất khó hiểu và không rõ ràng. Bạn cần luyện tập cách diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và giải thích lý do cụ thể, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time. Also, they may prefer to remember tasks in their mind rather than writing them down.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, giải thích lý do cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lặp từ.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and the apps can remind me about my tasks. This way, I don't have to worry about forgetting important things.

× Yes, when I go shopping I usually make a list for the things I can buy and when I see a list I could understand and I know the needs of the things important to buy.

✓ Yes, when I go shopping I usually make a list of the things I can buy, and when I see a list, I can understand and know the important things I need to buy.

The sentence has incorrect modal verb usage with 'could' which should be 'can' to express present ability. Also, 'for the things' should be 'of the things' to correctly express the list's content. The phrase 'the needs of the things important to buy' is awkward and unclear; it is better to say 'know the important things I need to buy' for clarity.

× Yes I do because my work is very busy and I have many aim to achieve so I need to at least for the things I can do in the day.

✓ Yes, I do because my work is very busy and I have many aims to achieve, so I need at least a list of the things I can do in a day.

The word 'aim' should be plural 'aims' to match 'many'. The phrase 'I need to at least for the things' is incorrect; it should be 'I need at least a list of the things'. Also, 'in the day' is better expressed as 'in a day' to indicate any day.

× Because making this is have a much time and the people is have a in and have a seeing the thing the thing we can do. And so making this have a little people make.

✓ Because making this takes a lot of time, and people find it difficult to see the things they can do. So, only a few people make lists.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Is have a much time' is incorrect; it should be 'takes a lot of time'. 'The people is have a in and have a seeing the thing' is nonsensical and needs to be rephrased to 'people find it difficult to see the things they can do'. 'Making this have a little people make' should be 'only a few people make lists' for clarity and correctness.

× In the technology life, I prefer make a list in the phone because when I make this in the phone I could the phone is remind me in the applications and so I don't remind the remind and I don't have a payment.

✓ In today's technological life, I prefer to make a list on my phone because when I do, the phone reminds me through applications, so I don't forget, and I don't have to pay.

'In the technology life' should be 'In today's technological life' for natural expression. 'Prefer make' should be 'prefer to make'. 'Make a list in the phone' should be 'make a list on my phone' because we use 'on' for devices. 'I could the phone is remind me in the applications' is incorrect; it should be 'the phone reminds me through applications'. 'I don't remind the remind' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't forget'. 'I don't have a payment' is better expressed as 'I don't have to pay'.