列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct grammar mistakes, such as subject-verb agreement and article usage.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it reminds me of the items I need to buy. This way, I can save time and avoid purchasing unnecessary things, which helps me keep my budget under control.

建议: Focus on completing your sentences and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Use linking words to connect ideas and clarify your points. Also, correct word choice errors such as 'least' instead of 'list'.

示例: Yes, I definitely make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. With the list, I can track the progress of my tasks, see which ones are complete, and identify those that need more attention.

建议: Work on grammar and sentence structure to make your answer clearer. Avoid repetition and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, use correct vocabulary such as 'confident' and 'organized'.

示例: I think some people don't like making lists because they are confident about their work and know what to do without writing it down. However, I am an organized person and prefer to make a list before starting a job.

建议: Improve grammar by using correct articles and plural forms. Avoid filler words and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, clarify your ideas with specific examples.

示例: I personally prefer to make lists on paper because I consider myself a traditional person. For example, I usually carry a small notebook with me whether I'm walking or shopping, as it always reminds me of what I need to do.

× Yes, I usually have a list when I go to shopping because it remind me what what item I need to buy during the shopping.

✓ Yes, I usually have a list when I go shopping because it reminds me what items I need to buy during shopping.

The verb 'remind' should be 'reminds' to agree with the singular subject 'it' (third person singular issue, but here treated as singular/plural agreement). Also, 'what what item' is redundant; 'what items' is correct because multiple items are implied, so plural form 'items' is needed. 'Go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping' without 'to'.

× Yes, I usually have a list when I go to shopping because it remind me what what item I need to buy during the shopping.

✓ Yes, I usually have a list when I go shopping because it reminds me what items I need to buy during shopping.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping' without the preposition 'to'.

× Also by this way umm it can help me to save the time and avoid me to buy unnecessary thing which can keep my budget under control.

✓ Also, in this way, it can help me save time and avoid buying unnecessary things which helps keep my budget under control.

'The time' should be 'time' because 'time' is uncountable here. 'Unnecessary thing' should be plural 'unnecessary things' because it refers to multiple items. 'Avoid me to buy' is incorrect; the correct form is 'avoid buying'.

× Yes, I definitely make a list for my work because, uh, it helped me to be more organized and with the least I can track the progress of my work to see which word, which tasks are complete and which ones need attention.

✓ Yes, I definitely make a list for my work because it helps me to be more organized and with the list I can track the progress of my work to see which tasks are complete and which ones need attention.

The verb 'helped' is past tense but the context is present habitual action, so it should be 'helps'. 'With the least' is a mishearing or typo; it should be 'with the list'. 'Which word' is incorrect; it should be 'which tasks'.

× With the least, I can be more organized and.

✓ With the list, I can be more organized.

'Least' is incorrect; it should be 'list'. The sentence was incomplete; the corrected sentence completes the thought properly.

× For me, some people who don't like make the least, it's because maybe they have the confident to about their their job and they clear with their own thing they know what to do.

✓ For me, some people who don't like to make lists, it's because maybe they are confident about their job and they are clear about their own things; they know what to do.

'Don't like make the least' is incorrect; it should be 'don't like to make lists'. 'Have the confident' should be 'are confident'. 'Clear with their own thing' should be 'clear about their own things'. Also, 'their their' is a repetition error.

× Unlike me. I I I am a organised person. I need to list before I start a job.

✓ Unlike me, I am an organized person. I need to make a list before I start a job.

'A organised' should be 'an organized' because 'organized' starts with a vowel sound. 'I need to list' is incorrect; it should be 'I need to make a list'.

× I personally prefer to make a list on paper because I consider myself a tradition person.

✓ I personally prefer to make a list on paper because I consider myself a traditional person.

'Tradition person' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'traditional'.

× Ah, for example, I usually bring a small notes with me no matter I'm walking or shopping because it always remind me what to do.

✓ Ah, for example, I usually bring small notes with me no matter if I'm walking or shopping because it always reminds me what to do.

'A small notes' is incorrect because 'notes' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. It should be 'small notes'. Also, 'it always remind' should be 'it always reminds' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'No matter I'm walking' should be 'no matter if I'm walking'.