列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to use correct vocabulary and grammar, for example, say 'making a list' instead of 'making last'. Also, keep your answer concise and clear, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me focus on buying only the items I need, which saves time and money.

建议: Avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly. For example, say 'I don't make lists for my office work because unexpected tasks often arise, making lists less effective.'

示例: No, I don't make lists for my office work because unexpected tasks often come up, so lists don't help me stay organized.

建议: Use correct vocabulary and grammar, such as 'making lists' instead of 'making lasts'. Also, provide clearer reasons with linking words to improve coherence.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because it takes time, and they prefer to rely on their memory to manage priorities from previous days or weeks.

建议: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding linking words and a topic sentence to make it more natural and structured.

示例: I don't mind making lists either on paper or on my phone. However, if my husband goes shopping, I prefer to write the list on paper and give it to him for convenience.

× Making last is very important step for free shopping because it helps me to stick to only buying the items that I need.

✓ Making a list is a very important step for free shopping because it helps me to stick to only buying the items that I need.

The phrase 'Making last' is incorrect; it should be 'Making a list'. The word 'last' is a typo or incorrect word choice here. Also, the article 'a' is missing before 'very important step'. The correct phrase is 'Making a list is a very important step'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Making last is very important step for free shopping because it helps me to stick to only buying the items that I need.

✓ Making a list is a very important step for free shopping because it helps me to stick to only buying the items that I need.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'very important step'. In English, singular countable nouns require an article. Adding 'a' before 'very important step' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I don't make a list for my work at work at my office work because it does not work and usually my work is getting distracted with sudden onset of matters.

✓ I don't make a list for my work at my office because it does not work and usually my work gets distracted by sudden onset of matters.

The phrase 'work at work at my office work' is repetitive and awkward; it should be simplified to 'work at my office'. Also, 'my work is getting distracted' is incorrect; 'work' as a subject is not typically 'getting distracted'. Instead, 'my work gets distracted' or better 'I get distracted' is more appropriate. Additionally, 'with sudden onset of matters' should be 'by sudden onset of matters' to use the correct preposition.

× I don't make a list for my work at work at my office work because it does not work and usually my work is getting distracted with sudden onset of matters.

✓ I don't make a list for my work at my office because it does not work and usually my work gets distracted by sudden onset of matters.

The preposition 'with' is incorrectly used after 'distracted'. The correct preposition is 'by' when indicating the cause of distraction. Therefore, 'distracted with sudden onset of matters' should be 'distracted by sudden onset of matters'.

× So no need for me to do any kind of lists for the work.

✓ So there is no need for me to make any kind of list for the work.

The phrase 'do any kind of lists' is incorrect. The verb 'make' is used with 'list' rather than 'do'. Also, 'lists' should be singular 'list' because 'any kind of' is followed by a singular noun. Additionally, the sentence lacks a subject; adding 'there is' makes it complete.

× Sometimes I go with my brain, whatever priorities are there from yesterday and the last week.

✓ Sometimes I go with my brain, whatever priorities were there from yesterday and last week.

The phrase 'the last week' is incorrect; it should be 'last week' without 'the'. Also, the tense should be past 'were' to match 'yesterday and last week'. This correction aligns the sentence with proper plural usage and time reference.

× Sometimes I go with my brain, whatever priorities are there from yesterday and the last week.

✓ Sometimes I go with my brain, whatever priorities were there from yesterday and last week.

The preposition 'from' is not appropriate here when referring to time periods like 'yesterday and last week'. It is better to omit 'from' and say 'priorities were there yesterday and last week'.

× Sometimes I go with my brain, whatever priorities are there from yesterday and the last week.

✓ Sometimes I go with my brain, whatever priorities were there from yesterday and last week.

The definite article 'the' before 'last week' is unnecessary and incorrect. 'Last week' is a fixed time expression and does not require 'the'.