列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence and avoid redundancy. Use simple and correct sentences to express your idea naturally.

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store. It helps me remember what I need to buy and saves time.

建议: Your answer is somewhat relevant but lacks clarity and coherence. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific details about how making lists helps your work.

示例: Yes, I often make lists for my work in tourism. For example, I note important information about our city and country during my free time, which helps me organise my tasks effectively.

建议: Your answer is confusing and does not directly address the question. Try to give a clear opinion and explain reasons why some people dislike making lists, using linking words and specific examples.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally. For instance, they might feel that lists limit their flexibility.

建议: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and is unclear. Try to express your preference clearly and explain why, using linking words and correct sentence structure.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. This way, I can easily add or remove items whenever I need to.

× Yes, every time I go to the shop I will tell this to to Joe's which I will prefer to buy.

✓ Yes, every time I go to the shop I tell Joe's what I prefer to buy.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'will' to describe habitual actions, which is not appropriate. Habitual actions should be expressed in the present simple tense. Also, 'tell this to to Joe's' is awkward and contains a repeated 'to'. The correction uses present simple tense and clearer phrasing.

× That's why it's necessary for me and it's work.

✓ That's why it's necessary for me and it works.

The phrase 'it's work' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is that 'it works' (functions effectively). The verb 'work' needs to be in the present simple form 'works' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× In my opinion, I think we got people they using weeks when that's why they need to take a note to remember the information things they need to know to remember for this study or for this job.

✓ In my opinion, some people use weeks, so they need to take notes to remember the information they need for their studies or jobs.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical due to incorrect sentence structure and word choice. 'We got people they using weeks' is incorrect; it should be 'some people use weeks'. Also, 'take a note' should be plural 'take notes' when referring to general note-taking. The correction clarifies meaning and corrects grammar.

× In my opinion I wish I am I will take on my phone because when I using phone I will take it with me 20 hour time.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer to take notes on my phone because when I use my phone, I have it with me almost all the time.

The original sentence misuses 'wish' and mixes tenses incorrectly. 'I wish I am I will take' is ungrammatical. The corrected sentence uses present simple tense to express preference and habitual action. Also, 'when I using phone' should be 'when I use my phone'. '20 hour time' is unclear and replaced with 'almost all the time' for naturalness.

× That's why I when I need to remove something I just open my port and check it.

✓ That's why when I need to remove something, I just open my app and check it.

The word 'port' is incorrect here; the intended word is likely 'app' (application). Also, the sentence lacks a comma after 'That's why' and 'when I need to remove something' to improve clarity. The correction fixes the preposition and punctuation errors.