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Part 1

考官

Do you make a list when you shop?

考生

Do you make a list when you shop?

考官

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

考生

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

考官

Why don't some people like making lists?

考生

Why don't some people like making this?

考官

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

考生

Do you prefer to make a list on your paper or your phone?

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总分

总分: 5.0流畅度与连贯性: 5.0发音: 5.0语法: 5.0词汇: 5.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

分数: 10.0

建议: 学生没有回答问题,而是重复了考官的问题。建议学生直接回答问题,并给出简短的理由或例子。

示例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

分数: 10.0

建议: 学生没有回答问题,而是重复了考官的问题。建议学生直接回答是否制作工作清单,并说明清单是否有效。

示例: Yes, I make a list for my work every day, and it works well because it keeps me organized and focused.

Why don't some people like making lists?

分数: 10.0

建议: 学生没有回答问题,且句子不完整。建议学生直接回答为什么有些人不喜欢制作清单,并给出具体原因。

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

分数: 10.0

建议: 学生没有回答问题,而是重复了考官的问题。建议学生直接表达偏好,并说明原因。

示例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily edit it anytime.

语法

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Why don't some people like making this?

Why don't some people like making lists?

这里的代词“this”使用不当,应该用复数名词“lists”来指代前文提到的“making lists”,保持语义一致。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× Do you prefer to make a list on your paper or your phone?

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or on your phone?

“your paper”表达不自然,通常说“on paper”表示用纸张,且两个介词短语应保持平行结构,故应改为“on paper or on your phone”。

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