列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法和表达不够自然，存在冗余和不连贯的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更地道的表达方式。

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items. For example, last weekend I saved money by sticking to my list and avoiding snacks that I didn't really want.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，直接回答问题，并说明理由。

示例: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because it helps me stay organized. Crossing off completed tasks gives me a sense of achievement and improves my productivity.

建议: 回答不够清晰，语法和词汇使用错误较多，导致意思难以理解。建议用简单句表达观点，并给出具体原因。

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to follow their feelings and be spontaneous instead of planning everything.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议简化句子，直接表达偏好，并说明原因。

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. This makes it convenient and easy to check my list anytime.

× Yes, I always make this because it helps me remember what actually I needed to buy and avoid buying unnecessary items.

✓ Yes, I always make this because it helps me remember what I actually need to buy and avoid buying unnecessary items.

这里的时间是现在时态，表示习惯动作，所以“needed”应改为现在时态“need”。

× I don't, I didn't really want it.

✓ I don't, I don't really want it.

句子前半部分是现在时态，后半部分用过去时态不一致，应改为现在时态。

× I like the things of cut one or two things cross of my To Do List and for me it's available and useful to my work.

✓ I like to cut one or two things off my To Do List and for me it's available and useful for my work.

“like the things of cut”表达不正确，应改为“like to cut”；“cross of”应为“cut off”；“useful to my work”应为“useful for my work”。

× Well to my field if someone who like things follow their heart, they don't like use lust to their self.

✓ Well, in my field, if someone likes to follow their heart, they don't like to use lists for themselves.

“to my field”应为“in my field”；“someone who like things follow their heart”语法错误，应为“someone likes to follow their heart”；“use lust to their self”应为“use lists for themselves”，且“their self”应为“themselves”。

× Definitely, I found a full make a list on my because nowadays our smartphone is followed by myself everywhere, so making a list on the phone is convenient and helpful.

✓ Definitely, I find it useful to make a list on my phone because nowadays our smartphone follows me everywhere, so making a list on the phone is convenient and helpful.

“found a full make a list on my”表达不通顺，应改为“I find it useful to make a list on my phone”；“smartphone is followed by myself”被动语态错误，应改为主动语态“smartphone follows me”。