列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant but a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences simpler and more direct. Also, avoid unnecessary details like MBTI unless it is clearly explained. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy and manage my budget effectively.

建议: Your answer is somewhat confusing and incomplete. Make sure to answer the question directly and complete your sentences. Use correct grammar and avoid mixing tenses. Also, clarify your current status before explaining your list-making habits.

示例: I don't have a job at the moment because I am a student preparing for university. However, I make study lists to organise my tasks and stay focused throughout the day.

建议: Your answer is repetitive and unclear. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating the same points. Use linking words to connect your reasons logically and provide specific examples.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming to organise their schedule and check the list regularly. Also, they may feel confident that they can remember everything without writing it down.

建议: Your answer is clear but has some grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Try to use more natural expressions and avoid repeating words. Also, explain your preference with specific reasons and linking words.

示例: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because it is convenient and easy to access. For example, I can quickly check my to-do list while travelling, which saves me time.

× Absolutely because I am AJ type person according to the MBTI test, making a list is beneficial for me to understand the work I have to finished clearly and additional I think it tells me to account to calculate the amount of money.

✓ Absolutely, because I am an AJ type person according to the MBTI test, making a list is beneficial for me to understand the work I have to finish clearly and additionally, I think it helps me to account and calculate the amount of money.

The sentence misses the article 'an' before 'AJ type person' which is necessary before a vowel sound. 'Finished' should be 'finish' to match the infinitive form after 'have to'. 'Additional' should be 'additionally' as an adverb to connect ideas properly. Also, 'tells me to account to calculate' is awkward; 'helps me to account and calculate' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× making a list is beneficial for me to understand the work I have to finished clearly and additional I think it tells me to account to calculate the amount of money.

✓ making a list is beneficial for me to understand the work I have to finish clearly and additionally, I think it helps me to account and calculate the amount of money.

The phrase 'have to finished' incorrectly uses the past tense 'finished' after 'have to'. The correct form is the base verb 'finish' because 'have to' is a modal-like verb that requires the base form of the verb.

× No, because I do not have a work in nowadays but I am a students who are preparing for the university studies.

✓ No, because I do not have work nowadays but I am a student who is preparing for university studies.

'A work' is incorrect because 'work' is an uncountable noun here and does not need an article. 'Nowadays' does not need 'in' before it. 'Students' should be singular 'student' to agree with 'I am'. Also, 'who are' should be 'who is' to agree with singular 'student'. 'The university studies' is better as 'university studies' without 'the'.

× No, because I do not have a work in nowadays but I am a students who are preparing for the university studies.

✓ No, because I do not have work nowadays but I am a student who is preparing for university studies.

The plural 'students' is incorrect because the subject 'I' is singular. The verb 'are' should be 'is' to agree with singular 'student'. Also, 'work' is uncountable and should not have 'a'.

× So I like to make a list for my study because it is beneficial for me to complete the task for a whole day and.

✓ So I like to make a list for my study because it is beneficial for me to complete the tasks for the whole day.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which is incomplete. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context of multiple activities. 'A whole day' is better as 'the whole day' to specify the time period.

× Because it is complicated to make a test, most many, many people think that it is complicated to make it.

✓ Because it is complicated to make a list, many people think that it is complicated to make it.

'Most many, many people' is incorrect and redundant. The correct quantifier is 'many people'. Also, 'make a test' is likely a mistake for 'make a list' given the context.

× Because it has to spend a time to manage your schedule and check the list in additional and many people think that they do not forget the things.

✓ Because it takes time to manage your schedule and check the list additionally, and many people think that they do not forget things.

'Has to spend a time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'takes time'. 'In additional' should be 'additionally' as an adverb. 'The things' is better as 'things' without 'the'.

× Because it has to spend a time to manage your schedule and check the list in additional and many people think that they do not forget the things.

✓ Because it takes time to manage your schedule and check the list additionally, and many people think that they do not forget things.

'The things' is incorrect here because 'things' is a general plural noun and does not need the definite article 'the'. Also, 'your schedule' is acceptable but could be more consistent with 'their schedule' if referring to people in general.

× I prefer to make at least on my mobile phone because it is convenient for me.

✓ I prefer to make at least my list on my mobile phone because it is convenient for me.

'Make at least on my mobile phone' is incorrect. The phrase 'at least' is misplaced and unclear. Adding 'my list' clarifies the meaning. The preposition 'on' is correct for 'on my mobile phone'.

× Mobile phone is common in the society in nowadays so it is it is simple to make A to do list in my phone when I take a transportation and it can save my time.

✓ Mobile phones are common in society nowadays, so it is simple to make a to-do list on my phone when I take transportation, and it can save me time.

'Mobile phone is common' should be plural 'Mobile phones are common' to match general statement. 'In the society in nowadays' is incorrect; 'in society nowadays' is correct. 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list' with hyphens. 'In my phone' should be 'on my phone'. 'Take a transportation' should be 'take transportation' without 'a'. 'Save my time' is better as 'save me time'.