列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Apni answer e kichu grammar mistake ache, ar kichu sentence onek bar repeat hocche. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke sohoje, shothik bhabe rakhte, ar proshner uttor direct dite. Apni kichu linking word use korte paren jemon 'because' ba 'so' jate answer ta logical hoy.

示例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need to buy. For example, last week I made a list before going to the mall, and it saved me time and money.

建议: Apnar answer e kichu sentence structure vul ache, ar kichu part bujhte kosto hoy. Apni chesta korun proshner uttor direct dite, ar supporting details clear r concise rakhen. Linking words use korben jate answer ta bhalo flow kore.

示例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. For instance, when I go outside for tasks, I write down what I need to do so I don't forget anything.

建议: Apnar uttor proshner sathe mil nai, karon proshno hocche keno kichu manush list banate bhalobashe na, kintu apni bolsen keno manush list banate bhalobashe. Apni chesta korun proshner uttor direct dite, ar clear example dite.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things in their own way. For example, my friend doesn't make lists because she feels it limits her flexibility.

建议: Apnar answer e kichu repetition ache ar kichu grammar mistake ache. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke shothik bhabe rakhte, ar proshner uttor direct dite. Apni kichu linking word use korte paren jemon 'because' jate answer ta logical hoy.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I can carry it anywhere. For example, I use a note app on my mobile to keep all my shopping and work lists.

× Like whenever I go to shopping mall for shopping anything that time I try to follow list which is really helpful for me to maintaining.

✓ Like whenever I go to the shopping mall to shop for anything, I try to follow a list which is really helpful for me to maintain.

The phrase 'go to shopping mall for shopping anything' is incorrect. 'Go to the shopping mall' is correct with the definite article 'the'. 'Shopping anything' should be 'to shop for anything' using the base verb form after 'to'. Also, 'to maintaining' should be 'to maintain' because after 'to' we use the base form of the verb.

× Like whenever I go to shopping mall for shopping anything that time I try to follow list which is really helpful for me to maintaining.

✓ Like whenever I go to the shopping mall to shop for anything, I try to follow a list which is really helpful for me to maintain.

The phrase 'go to shopping mall' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'shopping mall'. Also, 'follow list' should be 'follow a list' because 'list' is a countable noun and needs an article here.

× Yes, I love to make a list whenever I work any things which is really helpful for me to maintain my work.

✓ Yes, I love to make a list whenever I work on anything, which is really helpful for me to maintain my work.

The phrase 'work any things' is incorrect. It should be 'work on anything' because 'work' as a verb often requires the preposition 'on' when referring to tasks. Also, 'any things' should be 'anything' as a singular pronoun.

× Like if I go to outside for any kind of thing that I do that time I just at least that what I would like to do.

✓ Like if I go outside for any kind of thing that I do, at least I know what I would like to do.

The phrase 'go to outside' is incorrect; 'go outside' is correct without 'to'. The sentence structure is also awkward and has been corrected for clarity and grammar.

× There are a number of reasons why people love to make list.

✓ There are a number of reasons why people love to make lists.

The noun 'list' is countable and should be plural 'lists' when referring to multiple instances. Also, 'love to make list' is incorrect; it should be 'love to make lists'.

× First of all, when they make list they can easily follow and when they work anything they can easily maintain their work for at least as well as as a student, if I maintain our list and write down the note, then I can easily maintain my study.

✓ First of all, when they make a list, they can easily follow it, and when they work on anything, they can easily maintain their work at least. As a student, if I maintain my list and write down notes, then I can easily manage my study.

'Make list' should be 'make a list' because 'list' is countable. 'Work anything' should be 'work on anything' with the preposition 'on'. 'Maintain our list' should be 'maintain my list' to match the subject. 'Write down the note' should be 'write down notes' as plural and no article is needed here.

× I love to least I love to make list on my digital devices which is really helpful for me because I can easily carry with me and that's why I always love to making list for my mobile phones, laptops or other devices.

✓ I love to make lists on my digital devices which is really helpful for me because I can easily carry them with me, and that's why I always love making lists on my mobile phone, laptop, or other devices.

'Make list' should be 'make lists' as plural. 'Carry with me' should be 'carry them with me' to include the object pronoun. 'Love to making list' is incorrect; it should be 'love making lists' because after 'love' the gerund form is used. Also, 'mobile phones, laptops' should be singular or plural consistently and 'on' is the correct preposition for devices.