列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“it's not very often to me to make a shopping list”应改为“I don't often make a shopping list”。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，同时注意时态和动词形式的正确使用。

示例: To be honest, I don't often make a shopping list because I like to browse around and pick up whatever I like.

建议: 回答中有重复词汇（efficient efficiency）和语法错误（'helps me to remind what should I do'应为'helps me remember what I should do'）。建议注意词汇的准确使用和句子结构的清晰，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: Well, of course I do. I usually make a list of my daily routine, which helps me remember what I should do throughout the day. If I complete all the tasks, I feel a sense of achievement.

建议: 回答内容较好，但表达略显笨拙。建议使用更自然的表达方式，如“some people find making lists troublesome”并用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: Well, some people think they can remember everything well, and they find making lists troublesome. Also, since life changes all the time, they feel that lists might restrict their flexibility.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“it made me a sense of intangible sentiment”应为“it gives me a sense of nostalgia”。建议简化表达，注意时态一致，并避免重复。

示例: Well, I'd prefer to make a list on paper. It gives me a sense of nostalgia, and writing things down helps me remember them better. I also have a special notebook just for my lists, which I really like.

× I just like to browsing around and picked up what I saw and if what I and whatever I like.

✓ I just like browsing around and picking up what I see and whatever I like.

动词后面接动名词形式时，应该用动词的-ing形式。这里的like后面应该接动名词browsing和picking，而不是不定式或过去式。

× I just like to browsing around and picked up what I saw and if what I and whatever I like.

✓ I just like browsing around and picking up what I see and whatever I like.

句子中picked和saw使用了过去式，但描述的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时see。

× I usually list my daily routine and it helps me to remind what should I do the whole day and if all the plan completed I feel a sense of achievement.

✓ I usually list my daily routine and it helps me remember what I should do the whole day, and if all the plans are completed, I feel a sense of achievement.

should是情态动词，后面直接接动词原形remind改为remember。句子结构不正确，should I do改为I should do。计划plans应为复数，且完成时态应使用are completed。

× Well, maybe they think they can remember all the things well and also making lists is troublesome for someone and you know that the real life changes all the time and this may restrict their behavior.

✓ Well, maybe they think they can remember all the things well, and also making lists is troublesome for some people, and you know that real life changes all the time, and this may restrict their behavior.

for someone用法不当，应该用for some people表示某些人。real life前不需要定冠词the。

× Well, I'd like to make a list on paper. Umm, first it made me a sense of intangible sentiment and writing them down can remind can help me to remember them well.

✓ Well, I'd like to make a list on paper. Umm, first it gives me a sense of intangible sentiment, and writing them down can help me remember them well.

made用法错误，应该用现在时gives。remind和can重复，应去掉remind。动词help后接动词原形remember，不用to。