列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, keep your answer concise and clear by limiting it to 3-4 sentences.

示例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because I often forget items. Making a list helps me stay organised and makes shopping easier and quicker.

建议: Your answer is unclear and lacks detail. Please respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence and explain how making a list helps your work. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

示例: Yes, I make a list for my daily work tasks. It helps me manage my time effectively and ensures I complete everything from morning till evening.

建议: Your answer is too brief and informal. Try to expand your response by explaining reasons clearly and using linking words. Avoid phrases like 'That's it' and provide a more natural conclusion.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they have a good memory and can stay focused without reminders. Therefore, they feel lists are unnecessary for them.

建议: Your answer is clear and well-structured. To improve further, try to use a wider range of vocabulary and add a concluding sentence to summarise your preference.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and user-friendly. The reminders help me stay organised and I can easily update my list anytime. Overall, using my phone makes managing tasks much simpler.

× Yes, I do make a list when I shop because I usually forgot forget the things which I should bring from the grocery stores and it's little bit confusing and listing the things which I should bring makes me simple and convenient for me to do shopping.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I shop because I usually forget the things which I should bring from the grocery stores and it's a little bit confusing, so listing the things which I should bring makes it simple and convenient for me to do shopping.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'forgot' and 'forget' together; 'forgot' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'forget' to match 'usually'. Also, 'it's little bit confusing' lacks the article 'a'. The sentence structure is improved by adding 'so' to connect ideas clearly.

× Yes, I usually do the day planning which I should do from morning till evening, which comes in place of work.

✓ Yes, I usually plan my day from morning till evening, which is related to my work.

The phrase 'do the day planning which I should do' is awkward and ungrammatical. Replacing it with 'plan my day' is clearer and more natural. 'Which comes in place of work' is unclear; 'which is related to my work' clarifies the meaning.

× Some people don't usually forget the things which they ought to do and they are very focused and they can do anything. That's it.

✓ Some people don't usually forget the things they ought to do; they are very focused and can do anything. That's it.

The relative pronoun 'which' is incorrectly used for people; 'that' or omission is preferred. Also, the sentence is improved by splitting into two parts for clarity and removing redundant pronouns.