列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to provide a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by concise reasons without repeating the same idea. Avoid redundancy and aim for natural phrasing.

示例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. Making a list sometimes feels restrictive and can be confusing for me.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but contains some unclear phrases and grammatical errors. Try to organise your ideas more clearly, use linking words to connect your points, and avoid confusing expressions.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay focused and remember my tasks. This way, I can manage my time better and complete my work more efficiently.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and logically, using linking words to connect your points. Provide specific reasons why some people dislike making lists.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it frustrating and time-consuming. Also, busy people with many responsibilities may feel that making lists adds extra pressure.

建议: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Make sure to complete your sentences and clearly state your preference. Use linking words to explain your reasons logically and avoid vague expressions.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because my handwriting is poor, and it's easier to organise lists digitally using colours and different formats.

× No I don't because I don't.

✓ No, I don't because I don't make lists.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'make lists' clarifies the meaning and corrects the modal verb usage by completing the thought.

× Making a list will just make me feel confused or frustrated, so I don't.

✓ Making a list just makes me feel confused or frustrated, so I don't.

The phrase 'will just make me' is less natural here; using the simple present 'makes me' is more appropriate to express habitual feelings. Also, 'so I don't' is incomplete; it implies 'so I don't make lists'.

× I will not make a list.

✓ I do not make a list.

Using 'will not' suggests future intention, but the context is about habitual behaviour, so the simple present 'do not make' is more appropriate.

× Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay all night and focus without at least I often forget the task I need to do next, which can be quite confusing.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay focused all night. Otherwise, I often forget the tasks I need to do next, which can be quite confusing.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper structure. Splitting into two sentences and correcting 'stay all night and focus without' to 'stay focused all night' improves clarity and grammar.

× Because making a list may be frustrated and time consuming must be honour.

✓ Because making a list may be frustrating and time-consuming, it must be a chore.

'Frustrated' should be 'frustrating' to describe the activity. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming'. 'Must be honour' is incorrect; likely intended 'must be a chore' or similar.

× Some people are very busy at work and still in some difficulty with their relationship.

✓ Some people are very busy at work and also have difficulties in their relationships.

The phrase 'still in some difficulty with their relationship' is awkward. Rephrasing to 'have difficulties in their relationships' is grammatically correct and clearer.

× They don't have much time to do.

✓ They don't have much time to do it.

The sentence is incomplete; adding 'it' clarifies what they don't have time to do.

× At least is not good for this type of people.

✓ At least, it is not good for this type of people.

The sentence lacks a subject; adding 'it' corrects the pronoun usage and completes the sentence.

× I would prefer making a list on my because write my writing is not very good and when I am making a list on paper I can't see what I am writing clearly, but on my can use different colours or different formats to show what I am writing and not what I am doing clearly.

✓ I would prefer making a list on my phone because my handwriting is not very good. When I make a list on paper, I can't see what I am writing clearly, but on my phone I can use different colours or formats to show what I am writing more clearly.

The original sentence is missing the noun after 'my' (phone). 'Write my writing' is incorrect; 'my handwriting' is correct. The sentence is long and confusing; splitting and correcting pronouns improves clarity.