列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Jawaabtaadu waa mid fiican laakiin waxaa jira khaladaad yar oo ku saabsan isticmaalka erayada iyo qaab dhismeedka jumladaha. Tusaale ahaan, "show up" waa khalad, waa in la isticmaalaa "go shopping". Sidoo kale, "effort in plus buying" ma cadda, waxaad u baahan tahay inaad isticmaasho weedh cad oo macno leh. Isku day inaad isticmaasho weedho fudud oo sax ah si aad u muujiso fikradaada si cad.

示例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping to make sure I don't forget anything important. It helps me stay within my budget and avoid unnecessary purchases.

建议: Jawaabtaadu waa mid wanaagsan laakiin waxaa jira khaladaad yar oo ku saabsan isticmaalka erayada iyo qaab dhismeedka jumladaha. Tusaale ahaan, "digital app" waa in la yiraahdaa "a digital app" ama "a digital application". Sidoo kale, "which uh, send me a reminder" waa in la saxaa sida "which sends me reminders". Isku day inaad isticmaasho weedho isku xiran oo nadiif ah.

示例: Yes, I definitely make a list for my work. It helps me organize and focus on my tasks. I use a digital app to keep track of my work list, which sends me reminders.

建议: Jawaabtaadu waxay leedahay khaladaad badan oo eray iyo naxwe ah. Tusaale ahaan, "making leaves" waa khalad, waa in la yiraahdaa "making lists". "start walking on their task" ma cadda, waxaa fiican inaad tidhaahdo "start working on their tasks". Sidoo kale, isku day inaad isticmaasho weedho isku xiran oo macno leh si aad u muujiso fikradaada si cad.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time. They believe they can remember what they need to do without writing it down, so they prefer to start working on their tasks directly. For example, my dad often goes shopping on weekends without making a list.

建议: Jawaabtaadu waa mid wanaagsan laakiin waxaa jira khaladaad yar oo ku saabsan isticmaalka erayada. Tusaale ahaan, "for less" waa khalad, waa in la yiraahdaa "more". "thingies" waa eray aan rasmi ahayn, waxaa fiican inaad isticmaasho "things" ama "items". Sidoo kale, "use app" waa in la yiraahdaa "use an app". Isku day inaad isticmaasho erayo sax ah oo rasmi ah.

示例: I prefer using my phone because it's always with me. I can easily change items and use an app to help me organize better. Plus, I can share my list with friends if I need to.

× Yes, I always make a list when I show up to ensure I don't forget anything important. It helps me stay within my budget and effort in plus buying.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I shop to ensure I don't forget anything important. It helps me stay within my budget and effort in addition to buying.

The phrase 'when I show up' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'shop' to match the question. Also, 'effort in plus buying' is unclear and ungrammatical; it should be 'effort in addition to buying' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes, I definitely make a list for my work. It helps me to organize and focus on my task. I use digital app to keep track of my work list which uh, send me a reminder.

✓ Yes, I definitely make a list for my work. It helps me to organize and focus on my tasks. I use a digital app to keep track of my work list which, uh, sends me a reminder.

The phrase 'my task' should be plural 'my tasks' to match the context of multiple tasks. 'Digital app' needs an article 'a' before it. The relative clause 'which uh, send me a reminder' requires the verb to agree with singular 'app', so 'send' should be 'sends'.

× Some people don't like making leaves because they think it takes too much time.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time.

The word 'leaves' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'lists'. 'Leaves' is the plural of 'leaf' and does not fit the context of making lists.

× They believe they can remember what they need to do without writing it down, so they prefer to just start walking on their task.

✓ They believe they can remember what they need to do without writing it down, so they prefer to just start working on their tasks.

The phrase 'start walking on their task' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'start working on their tasks'. 'Walking' is not appropriate here, and 'task' should be plural to match the context.

× Like my dad, every every like a weekend he goes shopping without writing it down.

✓ Like my dad, every weekend he goes shopping without writing it down.

The phrase 'every every like a weekend' is redundant and incorrect. The correct phrase is 'every weekend'. Also, 'writing it down' is correct as it refers to the list.

× I like using my phone for less because it's always with me.

✓ I like using my phone more because it's always with me.

The phrase 'for less' is incorrect here; the correct quantifier is 'more' to express preference.

× I can change thingies easily and use app to help me organize better.

✓ I can change things easily and use an app to help me organize better.

'Thingies' is informal and incorrect; 'things' is appropriate. Also, 'app' needs an article 'an' before it.